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-TWO MONTHS L8R-
{Molly's POV}
"C'mon Molly!" Niall said.
"I'm trying!" I replied whilst slipping out the window and jumping down onto the garden platform that was just below my bedroom window. I used the little holes in the platform to slide my fingers into and use as a sort of latter to get down.
Niall and I were sneaking out to the park at midnight which my strict parents wouldn't ever think of allowing. "Let's go!" He smiled taking my hand and running down the street to his car. He started up the engine and I prayed my parents wouldn't wake.
My violet hair was sort of wavy because I had let it air dry and my make up free face looked tired.
I bent down and re tied my worn, black, lace up boots. I wore regular skinny jeggings (I find them rather comfy) and a large white t-shirt that said "Best Friends Forever". Niall wore a matching one.
"Here we are!" Niall said.
I jumped out of the car and suddenly Niall and I were on a boat. The boat started to sink and then we were on a plane. And then turbulence hit.
"AHH!" I awoke with a start.
"It was all a dream," I breathed. "Only a dream."
Niall had gone to audition for the XFactor a while ago and made it through.
I moved to London with my friend Addysen after I graduated. She had worked with me at Starbucks for a while and we became really close. Addysen has black hair with pink highlights and piercing hazel eyes. She was very short and skinny and always had her hair in a bun.
I had changed when I moved to London. I wore a small amount of make up and I always did something pretty with my violet hair. I wore clothes that looked good on me now. No more raggedy t-shirts or worn boots.
Today I was wearing a black Cami tank top and a plain grey cropped shirt that showed off my shoulder. The black Cami was tucked into my dark wash skinny jeans. On my feet I wore my favorite silver heels. I had a small amount of foundation on with eye liner, mascara, and a dark violet colored lip gloss. My hair was wavy and I had a sparkly silver slouch beanie on.
"How may I help you?" I asked the next costumer.
"Can I have a chocolate chip cookie, a Caramel frapacino, and your number?" The boy smirked, flipping his curls.
"Yes, yes, and no," I smiled writing down his order.
"Harry stop flirting and get over here!" A brown haired boy with a shaved head scolded from behind him.
"I'll have the same as Harry except a sugar cookie, thank you Miss...uh...Molly," he said.
"No problem," I smiled.
"Liam," Harry whines.
"Shut up and thank the girl," Liam said.
I looked at Harry. He had his magnetic green eyes on the floor. "Thanks," he mumbled. "Zayn, you're up," Liam said whilst stepping out of line with Harry in tow. Zayn stepped up. He had black hair with a blonde streak going through it. It was going up like a...ski jump...? "I'll just have a mocha frap with extra foam," Zayn smiled.
"Coming right up," I nodded.
Addysen made Harry, Zayn, and Liam's drinks whilst I took the next order.
"Ello! I'm Louis the tommo rTomlinson and I'll be your h- OW!" Louis said clutching his foot. "Just order," the girl behind him scolded.
"Eleanor!" Louis whined. "UGH! Fine. I'll just have two cookies. One m & m and one chocolate chip."
Louis stepped out of line.
"Hi I'm Eleanor! Sorry about his childishness. Ill have one sugar cookie please," Eleanor said.
"It's okay! And here you are," I said handing Eleanor both hers and Louis's cookies.
"Hey can I have a- Molly?" The blonde boy asked. His hair was styled into a ski jump and his eyes were the bluest I've ever seen them. His teeth were lined with braces.
"N-Niall?" I asked.
"Wow, you've changed," he said.
"So have you," I smiled.
{Niall's POV}
The moment I saw that beautiful violet hair and those vibrant blue irises I knew it was Molly.
I've always liked Molly. Loved even. Even without her make up and her fitting clothes.
"You've changed," I said.
"So have you," she replied with a small smile that I assumed was genuine.
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