Could it be possible to fall in love?

Night-mare..(part 1)

Suzan's..POV

"Jake!!...u know im afraid of hights!"i tell him.Jake is really irritating me he knows i dont like being pushed (incase you are wondering were we are..we are at the park) he keeps on pushing me..."Aaaw is my little sis still scared of hights?"Jake says to me."Jake please stop pushing me!!" i cry. "If you are really scared of hights why do you get on the swing?".." Its none of your business, and if you dont stop doing what you are doing im gonna tell dad and you woldnt like that so stop!"he pushes me over and over again untill i started screaming..."Daddy!!,daaaaadddyyy!" he stops " Just know you wont get away with it ,sooner or later your goona give me back" for a second i did not know what he was talking about,...after the swing stopped i got off and crossed my arms" huh,just know that nomatter how hard you try i wont give you your diary untill u tell me the full story "before i could say any further justine inturrubts with his hands in his pockets"what story?" Justine asks."Suzan!,Justine!,..Jake and vannesa!" dad calls us.....and while we were walking to dad everything started vanishing one by one.I see myself in a room with no windows nor is there a door...i realised im in a white room "Dad!,Vannesa!,justine!" i started crying i knelt on the floor"jake" suddenly i started hearing justines voice.... "Justine is that you?" i ask.He responds by saying.... "Yes wake up please",then i realized it was just a night mare

Hy so...how was it????, was it bad...good
please tell me by commenting and please vote........its really my first time so i would really want to know how i went....oh and one more thing,i did not edit so you find any mistake please tell me (the image you see is suzan)