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Both Alphas sat quietly looking at the floor. One ran a his hand threw his hair, his palms slick with sweat the other Alpha tugged and shifted the dog tags he wore around his neck. The anticipation at eating at both of them but they had to wait. Suddenly the doors opened to the hospital room, a women covered in scrubs, walked out from behind a door smiling, she went to the Alpha in the North and took his hand. "Its a healthy baby boy." Then looking over at the Alpha from the East she smiled as well. "You have a beautiful girl."
Both Alphas smiled, one went to the other patting him on the back. As did the other out of respect. The women gestured to the men to follow her as she walked in the room. Soon walking in the men saw the love of their life's their Lunas hold fragir bundles in their arms.
The men were over joyed kissing their wife's and new born children. Nothing in that moment could making their happiness disappear.
Or so they thought.
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