DXD:REINCARNATION OF JADE EMPEROR

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Aight I decided To Drop This Novel For Some Reason

1.Unreasonable Start- I said That The Mc will Have The Power of The Jade Emperor Yet He Mainly Uses Tensura Powers and His Angel Side And Also The Fact That I made Him The First Angel made Me Realise How Truly idiotic I am Also Theres Alot of Unreasonable Things That I writted And The Lack of World Building I dindt Even Gave The Devils Some POV and The War The Fallens Are forgotten i just Made alot of Mistakes If i made The Mc a Fallen Angel He could Freely Use His Jade Emperor Powers But I was Too Dumb to Realise That It Was To Late to Fix it Also.The Holy Grail Its From GOH and I Realised That It Dindt Need Any Sacrifise. Also Killing And Absorbing Ddraig and Albion Is Good But The Mistake Is That How Could The Corpse Vanish Instately. I also Lack Information About The Dxd World

2.Too Fast Paced-I reaslised How Idiotic It is To Make Him Op in the 3rd Chapter He Became Seriously Op to the Point That The Story Wont Make Sense Anymore Like How All of His Unique Skill Evolved To Ultimate Skill

3.Bad Grammar and Alot of Spelling Mistakes-Im not a Good English Speaker Either my Vocabulary of Words are Very Limited to The Basics

(PEACE OUT)