SoulTaker: Vortex Part 1

The Egg

     " Jerry, go get the bricks!" shouted a man. The bright full moon rose up in the pitch black sky. Clouds circled as stars guarded the Moon. Voices of ordering men was stretched from every corner of a construction site. They were working on some building. Of course, the construction site was like an ant nest, with tiny people crowding everywhere from a bird's eye view. 

      " Sir...come and look at this!" shouted someone. Men from all direction were distracted from their works and ran towards the source of sound, scruntising the environment. " Trece? What's going on?" said a tall, lanky man. " What the heck is that?"asked another. In the middle of the construction site was some large, oval shaped, brownish rock, about the size of a man. It seemed like it crashed down from the sky as there was some brown dirt covering the bottom bits of the rock, as it was thrusting into the ground.

     " It's like a- um..a- um... a rock?" said a fat, short man with a flat nose. Everone started mumuring " I agree.." or "Maybe" or "I am hungry". " Whatever it is, we should continue our work. Leader won't be that happy," said another man. Everyone nodded and trudged away from the rock. Suddenly a "crack!" was heard...

      It seems like coming from the rock itself. Everyone looked back, raising their eyebrows, except for some who tried pulling their eyebrows up and superglueing the eyebrow at that position. Suddenly, the rock shook, and shook and shook... and SHOOK! The more it shook, the rapid gets higher till...till...CRACK!

     A thin creature, with the height till a man's chest  broke the rock open. It wasn't a rock, it was an EGG! The creature was disgusting. Its skin was red, like it was painted with fresh blood. YUCK! It was so thin that everyone could see its ribs breaking out of its skins as blood flowed out. It also had some bloody tendrils moving around behind its back. Its body made some terrible noises as it stepped out of the egg. It had an empty face. " Someone KILL it!" shouted a man. "It's a DEVIL!" Upon hearing that comment, the creature looked up. Short ovaly eyes appeared on its face as the chin ripped. A mouth appeared. Sharp, terrible, unholy looking fangs thrusted out of the gumline. Nobody ever saw a creature with tht much fangs. Oh man... imagine seeing it.

     Everyone screamed and ran away, flaing their arms. The creature followed and ran towards the man who said it was a devil. The creature used one of its tendrils and tied it around the man's neck.  Slowly, the man closed his eyes, and fell to the ground, still gripping his neck. The creature let go and ran towards, a man, who was armed with a hammer. The man clobbered the creature in the head. The creature screamed and the man's eyes turned red. The Scream of Death! The man's heart stopped as his eyes turned back to normal, his body dropping onto the ground like a ragdoll. 

    The creature was somehow smart too. It used its tendrils and picked up three random pebbles and threw at three men, who were facing the creature, standing close to each other. They slowly crumpled onto the floor. The rock hit the cranial nerve and caused instant death to the victims.

    For the rest of the night, workers and men attempted to kill it, but the creature was not to mention, really fast and powerful. It dodged thrown rocks and killed everyone in a surely Bloody Rampage.

                                                     The evil truly have RISED.....