My Best Friend's Brother {ft. Larry Stylinson And Ziam}

Chapter 18

A/N: Shout-out to nikegirl33

Third Person POV

"What's wrong, El?"

"Nothing. Nothing's wrong." El said stumbling over clothes that accumulated on the hotel caramel carpet.

"So, who was that on the phone?"

El knew that she couldn't possibly keep this secret away from Louis. So, she told him the only thing that might actually have an affect on him.

"I'm leaving"

Louis faltered, stepping closer but just a bit. He only came to Brighton to spend sometime away from home. And suddenly, El wanted to leave.

"Why? We're having so much fun here."

"No, Lou, you're having so much fun here. While you're out partying in the late hours of the night, I'm--- I'm cleaning up your mistakes. I'm being the responsible one. I thought we came here to have fun together!"

"Firstly, What mistakes have I made?"

"Oh, I don't know. How about when you threw up in that cab on 23rd? I had to pay for damages. And when you stole that hobo's bus card? And that tall man's club entry card? And when yo---"

"I get it! I've made a lot of mistakes. Secondly, I got what I came here for. I'm having fun! You're the one being a prick and not joining in."

"So what, dude! She's just upset because you're getting some and she's not!" Niall chipped in.

Eleanor knew that Louis was doing unspeakable things but she never knew what until now. All this time, she had been standing up for him with Harry but Harry was right.

"You've been cheating on Harry?!"

"I wouldn't call it cheating." Louis felt bubbles in his stomach.

"I would! All the stuff you did with Android! Whooo! What about yesterday with Jack and Jean? And Thomas? And Xander! He was the hottest!" Niall divulged as he walked over to the small fridge and plucked out one of the complementary bottles of alcohol and some shot glasses.

"Andrew, not Android!" Louis corrected Niall.

"Xander! As in my high school boyfriend, Xander?!" Eleanor exclaimed.

Louis suddenly didn't feel so good. His stomach churned and ached as he fell to the floor. He curled up into fetal position and let out a big scream and puke all over the floor. Eleanor was in shock! But Niall wasn't. Niall calmly walked over to Louis and got on his knees beside him. He poured a shot glass full of the hotel alcohol and mixed it in a red cup with something that he had brought.

"What the hell is that?!"

"Life juice. Just go with it." He fed it to Louis but as soon as it went down, it came right back up...all over Niall's new pants"

"Dude!! That's not cool! I just bought these!" He said getting up and running to the bathroom.

"Louis can you hear me?"

Louis looked up at El and tried to lift his hand up. He tried to ask for help, to call someone, but before he could do that, his limbs sprawled out of control. He was having a seizure.

"Oh my gosh! I'm going to call 9-1-1!"

El ran all around the room looking for her phone before realizing that it never left her hand after the phone call with Harry.

"9-1-1 What's your emergency?" The dispatcher said with a bored expression.

"Yes, My friend just collapsed on the floor and puked. He having a seizure now! Help!"

The dispatcher sighed a dramatic sigh before replying.

"Is your friend dying?" she said again boringly. What the hell?

"I don't fucking know! Just come and help him!"

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About an hour later, their hotel was surrounded with ambulance trucks. Louis was taken to the hospital and Eleanor followed in her car. But somehow, Niall was nowhere to be found. When they got to the hospital, El followed the Louis-filled gurney until three nurses held her back. Security escorted her to the waiting room when she fought the nurses back. They simply lifted her up in the air to get her to stop biting and pulling their hair. When she was alone (not completely alone as they watched her from the corner and the security cameras), she cried. Her heart ached. He was her best friend. They wouldn't even be in this predicament if it wasn't for Niall, who wasn't even here. Oh how that made her weep. The cause of this wasn't even here to witness it.

But as the tears fell more silently, she began to think. Was Niall really the cause, or was it Louis' inability to....no. El's mind wandered aimlessly until a beautiful brunette nurse approached her.

"You've been awfully quiet over her. Would you like some water or something?" El shook her head no. The brunette nurse sat down.

"You should call someone. You know, a shoulder to cry on or at least someone to talk to"

"I don't know who to call. Before everything happened, I told his boyfriend not to come anywhere near him and he doesn't have any other friends that I know of because he's such an ass hat."

"Ass hat, you say? Are you his friend?"

"The bestest."

"His mom and dad around?"

"We're not from here. We came from Doncaster all the way to Brighton just to get away."

"Call his mom."

"And tell her what, that her son just suddenly collapsed?"

The nurse felt sorry for El. She knew exactly what was wrong with Louis and yet, she wasn't aloud to tell yet.

"You know, don't you?What's wrong with him? "

"Yeah, but I can't say. Here, tell her that her son is in surgery and you can't give specifics."

"Yeah, ok"

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