Dragonborn escape (rewitten)

The forest.

The forest was eerily dark, even in the daylight. No birds sang and there wasn't a sign of life. no one dared enter since the 'happening'.

Slenderman looked at the forest with awe. It was more scary than his. He was jealous alright. He thought his forest was the scariest until he found this one. No one even dared look at it ever since 'someone' murdered three boys at camp howl in the center.

He appeared by the camp. It was quiet, even for him. The wood cabins looked dark and old, even though it was only a few days ago since they were murdered.

He would usually claim such forests for himself but he had an awkward feeling about this one. He felt like someone was threatening his every move. He searched, unaware of the evil watching him. He came across the last cabin but it was burnt to the ground!

This surprised him. Had he done that? Ash lay everywhere. On the ground were many blood stains and the note James had in his hands. Slender was not surprised, however. He did this himself. But who was copying him? The day suddenly turned to night, the moon was purple and the stars hid themselves.

Slender didn't notice. He was too busy pacing. he heard footsteps and turned to see a boy in a denim jacket with brown hair. James. He stared at him with sad eyes, then turned and walked off. Slender realized it was of the dead boy's ghost and went after him.

Slender lost him in the forest but head picked up something he had dropped. It was a picture of a dragon, a big one alright, and a smaller human. He stared, then shrugged and continued. He soon saw Sam, chased him, lost him and found another note. It said: help me! He saw ray, repeated the process and found another note. She is real! It said.

Slender looked at it, then felt as if being watched. He turned and saw HER!?!?!? He turned and ran, actually afraid of her. He charged on and on till she was outside. He then appeared in his own forest, thinking she could not reach him. He thought wrong.

He stared at the ground, scared senseless. He looked up.... Into her eyes and slender, for everyone's relief, wasn't seen for a while, while he came back to life.

K guys, im gonna stop there, till I get some comments. :)

Also, sorry for the short chapter.

See ya.