Fears Coming True

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Chapter 1 - Where it all started

Cold , dark and wet my worse fears are coming right at me. Cold ,Shivering your last breathe you take ,  feeling so numb you cant move , the time when you need to most. Wet , splashes coming from behind that makes you jump out of your bones. Dark seeing nothing but hearing everything there is , all thats left is listening to the whimper and pain right thought till the last breathe.

I thought a party would cheer me up and forget about all the pain left inside me , turns outs it didn't.  It all started just last year , i was having the time of my life partying with all my friends meeting the cuttest guys but something didn't feel right i felt that there was someone around that someone was following me and thats when i got paranoid. I complained to my parents that there was someone always there watching me i could feel it but all they could say was " it's just your imagination darling , your safe theres nothing to worry about".

But they were wrong , i was walking home from a party the next night it was cold, dark and wet not to mention i was half drunk. Not the best combination , it was quite until i heard the footsteps , i turned around but no one was to be in sight. So i keep walking but move my pace up a bit , my breathing starts to get heavier as i can hear the squeaks coming from the shoe as it hits the wet cold ground. I turn but as i turn the noise stops but now i'm not alone a showdow peeking right beside the tree starts to move , my heart is pumping im so terrified i jolt down the street without hesitation.

Chapter 2:  Mistake

I finally arrived home huffing and puffing. I quickly open the door and slam the door shut and lock it. I call out to mum and dad but there was no answer. Great the time I actually need them there not even here. Then suddenly I hear a loud bang. I freeze being so horrified, but I told myself I have to keep moving and stay calm. I dash to all the windows lock them all up and sprinted right up the stairs. I run in my mum and dad’s room shut the door and panic. Trying to think what to do i drag the dresser and move it straight to the door. There that should do it i thought to myself. Being an idiot as usual i don’t think of getting the phone. I go over to pick it up but as i see the cords have been cut. "No fucking way".

The footsteps are coming, SHITT! I immediately cover my mouth as soon as i realized my mistake. I hear that squeak as I did before it just got louder and louder but then suddenly stopped. I think that maybe he is gone, just maybe it was safe.  I peep though the key hole to see if there was anything suspicious. Then out of nowhere an eye came staring right at me , i screamed as loud as i could and yelled out " leave me alone please". Clearly that was not going to do any good. I dash into the bathroom open the window and jump. Unlucky for me i sprained my ankle in the process. I limb over to the dog kennel thinking that he would never look here to find me and all I had to do is wait. Time when by and i was getting tired i heard nothing but i still wanted to be safe so i stayed where i was. Before i knew it i was a sound asleep.

Chapter 3: Locked

I woke up back in the kennel , rubbing my eyes with tears coming out of my eyes , I look out side to see how things were and come to my shock I realize I’m not in my backyard anymore. I have a closer look eyeing every little detail as where I was. Pipes and walls dripping , mice squeaking and darkness all around not one light insight. I rummaged thought my jacket pocket and found a little flashlight. "Ahhaa, found it ". I switch the torch on and my eyes follow the little white light. I pointed to a wall and running down those walls were drips of blood pouring out. I start to get scared and i wanted out.  I point the torch in the opposite direction and this time i get up and follow the light. As I get closer i find a set of stairs that led up to a door. I decide to climb up the stairs , as each foot stepped on to the plank a loud squeak came from it. When i got up to the top i grabbed hold of the door knob and turned it , sadly it was locked. " Great , that’s just what i need" i whimpered.

I go back down the stairs to see what else i could find. I point my flashlight towards the back of the kennel and see to find bodies everywhere. The smell of them was outrageous I couldn’t bare it. Blood was everywhere underneath, I hold my nose and take a closer look at the dead people, I see they are slashed with their insides opened up with thread stitching them up. Their hearts are all out and they were eye less. “What sort of person does such a thing I thought frustrated. They looked like they were in a lot of pain so i had to promise myself i will not let that happen to me, no matter what it takes I’m getting out of here.

I go seek to find if there are any windows and in my luck there is. But it is too high up so I go find something i could stand on. Once I do I push the window with all my strength and as you could guess it’s locked. I go around the room trying to find something that I could throw so it will break. The only thing I could find was an old  lamp , I ripped the shade off  , took the light bulb out and took a shot at the window. My first one did'nt do anything at all. " C'mon don't be a baby just smash it". My second shot at it got a few cracks in it. Still not hard enough. My last hit i just two hands with as much power as I could , I finally smashed the window.

I break the rest of the pieces off and start to fit though the small hole and climb out of the melodrous basement. As I was climbing out I noticed  I got abit stuck. I try and wiggle out but I just couldn't get thought. Unexpectedly I heard footsteps coming down the stairs. SHITTTT! I start to panic , I just didn't know what to do. As i was trying to get my self out , i felt a hard pull on my leg. " AHHHH" I Start screaming as loud as i could and kick  fiercely at the man. BANG , was all i could hear , " yess got him". I Manage to get my body though the window as my leg sips out he grabs it again. I kick once again but he's stronger than me , I pull urgently with as much strength i had. My foot slipped out of my shoe , "Why the hell didn't I think of that". I then Jolted.