Avneil dastaan

part-1 (starting)

In the beautiful home a payal sound came and some giggling and laughing sound also

Lady 1 - careful bacha tum gir jaogi
Bhago mat. Ashish pakdo use tum kha uske saath khel rahe ho.Vidhyut dhundho use.

Lady 2 - princess ko only Prince hi pakad sakta h neela jii apko pta h na ab Avni kha hogi yeh sirf wo shaitaan hi janta h

Neela- shweta jii use shaitaan mat boliye. Mera tillu samjhdaar h.....lekin mein Avni se tang aa gayi hu apko pta h na baarish hone wali h or baarish mein jaise hum more ko nahi rook sakte waise hi Avni ko rokna namumkin h bheegne se.

Yeh sab in dono ki wajeh se hua h ab dhondho apni rajkumari ko aap dono. jab meine room lock Kara tha toh open kisne kiya aap logo ko pta h na Avni ko cold kitni jaldi hota h phir bhi......

Shweta jii - neela ji bilkul theek kha rahi h aap sabko pta h.....phir bhi .... Aur in sab mein yeh dono akele nahi h ...sabse bada haath inke best friend prakash jii ka h...neela jii...unhone hi inki help ki hogi Avni ko bhgaane mein.

Phele yeh madad karte h phir Hume Avni se jyadaa in 4 kon sambhalna pad jaata h jab Avni bimar padti h...ab dhondho Avni ko ise phele apka ladka tiluu a jaaye or use pta chal jaaye...

Bebe- oh madam mdona baarish shuru ho gayi h apna lecture band kar or Avni puttar ko dhoondh.wo ghar par hi hogi
Kuki tillu ne use promise liya h ki wo aaj ghar se bhar nahi jayegi dhondhoo use

(Home backyard)

One girl...16 years old is dancing in rain 🌧️☔ uff yeh baarish se acha or kuch nahi h ...... Tum hamesha itni late kyu aati ho jaldi aaya karo u know na mujhe tum kitni passand ho....Now she started sneezing.

In Khanna mansion

One boy enter with his friends... He started shouting mom...bebe...
Kha ho aap...lagta h tere ghar par koi naahi h ......

Boy- mujhe pta h yeh log kha h or kisi dhoondh rahe h .....

Suddenly...girl shouting oho yeh baarish band kyu ho gayi...hmm barish to aa rahi lekin... Girl squeeze her eyes as now she knew she has gone..... One boy was standing behind her... carrying umbrella over her head.

So yes they are avneil

Avni- neiluu tum kab aaye tum toh school visit pe gaye the na teachers ke saath... suddenly she started sneezing badly.

Neil- Tum chup raho phele andar chalo

Everyone was present in the hall of Mehta mansion
Yeh ladki yaha h humne kha kha nahi dhoondha...tillu tujhe avi kha mili..

Neil- meine tumhe aaj ghar se bhaar nikalne ke liye mna kiya tha na phir tum kyu gayi bhar

Neil friends rehne da Neil we all know how much our doll loves rain than why are you scolding her...

Neil - yes u all r right... Mere kuch khene se fark kya padta h karni toh ise apni manki h ... Jab meine mna kiya tha aaj tum baarish mein nahi bhegogi ghar bhar nahi jaogi toh kyu gayi tum khana mansion ke backyard mein ...

Neela- Avni tum kisi ki nahi sunti ho
Tumhe pta h na doctor ne pichli baar kya kha tha see ab tumhe cold ho gaya na kyu gayi tum Ghar se bhar this time I am with Neil

Everyone yes this time we all are with Neil princess

Avni- mein ghar se bhar kha gayi, mein ghar mein hi toh thi bus doosre Ghar mein ...kyu tillu kya khana Mansion mera ghar nahi h .... prakash papa...

Prakash - princess wo tera hi ghar h puttar.

Neil- Avni apna natak band karo tumhe hmesha apne manki karni hoti h ..

Avni- tum chup raho... Samje mujhe baarish passand h mein bheeg sakti hu
Or bheegongi 😤

Neil- theek h karo apne man ki mein ho Koon koi bhi nahi haina Avni Mehta tumhe acha lagta h sab tumhare aage peeche ghoomte h kaam chodkar tumhari seva mein lag jaate h jab tum bimar padti ho tumhe toh acha lagta h sab tumhe attention dete h kyu...

Avni was shocked
Avni meine kisi ko nahi kha yeh sab karne ke liye samjhe

Avni started shivering badly
Avni felt unconscious
Or wo behosh jaati because of rain and the wet clothes..

Neil panick ho jaata h

Sab Avni ko room mein lekar jaate h
Ashish doctor ko phone karta h ....
Neila shweta Avni ki dress Change karte h

Neil ke friends chale jaate h

Neil - shit yeh meine kya kar diya I know
Mein gusse mein tha kyuki Avni baarish mein bimar pad jaati h or doctor ne saaf bola h ki yeh uske liye risky ho sakta h but yeh....urhhhh

Doctor came and checked Avni
Mein app logo ko bola h ise baarish mein mat bheegne diziye continuosly fever it's not good for her health
See ...

Neela sab theek h na doctor

Doctor - yes, but plz aage se aisa nahi hona chahiye kisi ke liye bhi continuously fever achi baat nahi h meine injection de diya h inhe thodi der mein hosh aa jayega..

Neil- Avi I am sorry u know na tumhe aise shekar mujhe bilkul acha nahi lagta plz jaldi theek ho jao uske baad mujhe jitna datna h datna...

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As yeh starting h but aage bhout intresting ho jayega
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