koko love rat

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D peered her head over the crowds of people trying to watch NCT. Yeah, she paid good money to see them
all, but she also paid that good money to see her favorite, Taeil. Craning her long neck, she figured she'd have seen him by now being a giraffe, but still she had not.
"Girl, this ain't it." D said.
"Nah, yeah Gus-Gus can't see 'em either." Said a small voice from below.
Danielle looked down not believing her eyes, but his voice. it felt like home...this small mouse. Was it..love?
-Mistress Bop

Yes it was love. Her one other true love: reasons to commit great violence. She pulled up her foot. All the way up to her chest. She then aggressively swings her
leg back before punting the disgusting uglyass rat as hard as she can. D salutes the flying pest as she watches it land on some random chick. "Koko! Oh
shit! Theres a rat!" Oh so her name is
Koko. D quickly loses interest and glances back up at the stage. NCT Stage in New Zealand is finally starting!! <3
-gai

D enamored loses herself watching NCT. Meanwhile koko fuming comes running up from behind and whacks D. "Oii what was that for?" Asks a confused D.
"Youyeeted a rat at me you idiot!"
"Ah, yes I did do that but-"
"but nothing let's end this now"
koko drags D out of the concert while she sobs slowly losing sight of NCT and tries reaching out for them.
- Jughead

D gets thrown onto the street by an enraged Koko.
"Who knew tiny people could be so strong?" D thinks out loud (a/n, lol know why).
"What did you just say to me?" Koko asks.
"And angry.. yikes" D thinks.
Koko begins hyperventilating - if this was a cartoon steam would by coming out of her ears.
"Do you want to die?"
"Everyday" sighs D.
"Let's end it!"
Koko yells in a battle cry as D picks herself up off the dirty ground.
-NOCHU<3

"Can't we do this some other time?", D groans, "I just couldn't be bothered right now."
"NO." Koko yells. "You started this now let's finish
this."
Battle music starts playing. Koko is the first to make her move. She uses her special attack..
-hotd!ilfsnearu

"Strawberry Milkshake!" Koko grins. "You
want smoothie??"
D falls to her knees.
"My weakness! Food that will cause me great pain. I wanna eat but it will kill me."
D struggles to fight the urge to drink the milkshake. Tears gather in her eyes. She knows her choice.
-gai

D snatches the milkshake from kokos hands. She drinks it's greedily. Throwing the whole thing back in
record time.
"How do you feel?" Koko mutters.
"Hmm.." Dpauses."think I'm ..good?"
In an instant D is screaming in pain, clutching her
stomach.
- NOCHU<3

D failed to ever realize she was lactose intolerant... she dashes to the restroom with koko laughing at her.
- Jughead

Koko put her fork in the brownie smiling. It was her brownie now that her lactose intolerant friend, D
was gone. She was still laughing as the waiter, Wonho offered her a strawberry and Koko took it as D watched sadly from the bathroom as Koko
invited Wonho to D's chair. She watched the two share a strawberry as Ang, the busboy looked on sadly as well.
-Mistress Bop

Review: 3/10; not much character
development. Didn't like the ending
how Ang was sad?? It was irrelevant and
made no sense. However, that being
said, Ang sounds like a cool character
but I can't help but feel like he was very
underrated. He deserved more
backstory.
-hotd!ilfsnearu

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