The Bad Surprise

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 “Marlene?”  Fernando softly asks through the phone while driving to his girlfriend, Marlene, house in his new 1970 blue Buick GSX .

Que paso?” Marlene responds while lying down on her bed.

“Remember how I told you that I couldn’t see you today?”

“Yeah babe I remember, even though it’s our two year anniversary. Will I be able to see you tomorrow?” Marlene asks worriedly.

“I don’t know chiquita, why don’t you look outside your window?” Fernando says while getting out of his car.

Marlene jumps out of bed with excitement and heads towards her bedroom window. Looks out and see’s Fernando lying back on his new car with red roses in one hand and his phone on the other one. Marlene quickly slips her slippers on and heads downstairs. She pauses in front of the mirror, making sure her hair and makeup look fine. Just as she grabbed the door knob to open the door, she heard gun shots outside.  Worried about Fernando, she opened the door quickly, only to see a car race off in the distance, bullet holes all imbedded in the walls of her house, and a body lying on the ground, surrounded by a pool of dark-red liquid, with red roses in one hand, and a phone in the other. . .

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