Finding them

well this is my first story and i want to see what yall think so comment  and tell me what you think  ................... I wrote this story for my best friend dita i love you dita

                 toms pov

i was walking down the hall when i saw her. She looked the exactly the same from the last time i saw her. With her red/brown hair, chocolate brown eyes and her beautiful same body. "Abby!" i screamed at her

                Abby's pov

I  could hear his thoughts buts i couldn't find him. I was looking all around. Then all of a sudden "Abby!" he screamed at me. i turned around and he was standing right next to me. he looked so different he had a beard and a mustache he looked like he could be 23 and he got much more chubbier. "hey that's not fair." he said as his smile disappeared. i knew he had heard my thoughts. "sorry nut its true, but that's not important right know plus you said i had red/brown hair you know i have red hair." i said as i put my hands on my hips pretending to be mad at him. he looked at me annoyed he knew i was gonna say something about it. " what are you doing here?" he said through his mind. " i cant tell you here we need to talk about this somewhere else private." i said through my head too. the bell rang for first period "well i guess i have to go see you at lunch!" i said about to cry. "its OK don't cry we found each other now nothing can separate us i promise, see you at lunch!" he said acting like my brother