☆.★ NUMBER THREE 👻 ?¡
Go in depth the relationships of the characters/make the characters bond more
Its a turn off for me when writers/authors don't really go in depth on y/n or any characters relationship at all, saying things like, 'oh they get along well' isn't enough for me.
I need to see their little interactions, moments and literally them hanging out and finding more about that certain character.
I want the characters to slowly get to know the main character more and more whilst also let the plot move, I don't just wanna see how they had a hang out and the character already thinks they are inlove you see I'm a sucker for love at first sight troupe but I want the character who fell inlove at first sight to see their crushes imperfections, flaws, hobbies, etc,.
I want them to know more about them until they really know who they are and in the end they really do fell inlove!