Is it right (sonadow fanfic)

chapter 6

Sonic POV

I have to find Sally where could see be. Then I hear a scream and run in that direction "Sally......"

Sally POV

"I don't need sonic to survive!! I can live on my own. And just to get on Shadow and Amy's nerves I will do whatever I want!!" I yell into the night as I run away to anywhere. Then I see some people walking by and I get a idea I pull out my gun start to shoot random people... the sounds of the wounded made me laugh. I felt like I could do anything and there was no sonic to tell me to stop and mess up my fun game I was playing with the people at the fair. The whole place was in complete chaos. People where running away screaming people where dieing I love every second of it but then I hear I voice behind me I turn to see sonic standing there dumbfounded at me.
Sonic POV

"What?" She asked "You.....you've gone mad.." I said and looked sad. "I'm not mad I'm playing a game of tag with all these people." I just looked at her" you can't be serious..." "OH but I am my blue friend!" Then see jumps around like a maniac humming happy birthday. Then there's a crash and Sally holds her stomach and falls backward over the side of the pear. "Sally!!" I jump over the side to try and grab her. I know my weakness is water but at this moment I really don't care because Sally just landed in the water and so-
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(Shadow......)