PART 1of BROWN BURN

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Once about 2 years ago 6 boys who were in their late teens decided to go to vacation . They lied to their family that they are going on a school trip . One night before the journey Leo messaged Jin and asked him about the manion.
Leo - Hey Jin
Jin - Hi anything important
Leo - No just wanna ask that what was the name of the manion
Jin - Brown Burn mansion
Leo - Ummmmmm what do you know about this mansion
Jin - It's in Alaska , it's a old mansion the owner of the mansion died about 50 years ago .Now the caretaker Mr. Ben take care about it


Leo - Oh okay goodnight see you tomorrow
Jin - Good night
The next morning everyone was excited to go but Leo was behaving a little weird but no one paid attension to it

After a long journey they finally reached their destination .
Soon everyone seperated .

Jin remembered that the caretaker mentioned about a treehouse so he went to see it in the forest .

Louis saw a room as he entered he saw a piano . Louis had was fond of piano so he went to play it as soon as he started playing the piano everything went silent .

Alan saw a gate as he entered he found that it was a library . A big library . Alan likes reading so he started to read and soon the time passed.

Alex and Jasper saw a garden. It was a rose garden . Soon they set up a picnic sight ,but they thought it would be fun if the others will join too so Alex went to call other but soon he was lost in the garden . Jasper waited and waited............

It was about 4 in the evening .
Suddenly Alan messaged in their group chat seeing that everyone was shocked. The message was

"Hey guys I was in the library reading book when reading I saw a book in which the history of this mention was their . We all should not be here . It is a haunted mansion . The owner of this mansion Mr. James Brown Burn died in this mansion as the government wanted this to a tourist attraction but Mr. James didn't agreed so they killed him. After that his soul lives here and the caretaker has the job to bring people here so that he can kill them.
It has traps the treehouse, library, rose garden and the music room. The traps get activated when the piano starts. Only a person from outside can let us out."

GROUP CHAT

Leo - ummm guys I am not in any of the traps tell me your location i will get you guys out.
Alex - Guys me and Jasper were in the rose garden i went to invite you all but got lost .
Jasper - Go and take Jin out i will find Alan.
Leo - Ok Jin i am coming to take you first.

Leo - Have you passed this tree.
Jin - yes I went to the right.
Leo - Guys I found Jin , Louis in which direction you went?
Louis - left.
Leo - ok we found Louis cring like a baby . Alan where you went?
Alan - Leave me it's getting dark go and found Alex and Jasper.
Alex - i found Jasper sitting on the bench .
Leo - great we will find you soon.

SOON THEY FOUNDED ALEX AND JASPER AND RETURNED TO TAKE ALAN BUT IT WAS TOO LATE .THE GATES OF THE MANSION WERE CLOSED. THEY TRIED THEIR BEST TO OPEN THE DOOR BUT ALL IN VAIN . ALAN SACRIFICED HIS LIFE TO SAVE HIS FRIEND. EVERYONE WAS BLAMING THEMSELVES THAT BECAUSE OF THEM THEY LOST A GOOD FRIEND .

BUT SUDDENLY SOMEONE PATTED JIN'S SHOULDER IT WAS ALAN HE ESCAPED WITH THE HELP OF THE CARETAKER AS THE CARETAKER DIDN'T WANTED THAT ANY MORE INNOCENT LIVES TO BE SACRIFISED.

ALL 6 GROUP HUGGED AND SOON THEY LEFT THE MANSION.

BUT AS SOON AS THEY LEFT THEY LOST THEIR MEMORY THEY DIDN'T REMEMBERD THE BROWN BURN MANSION OR THEY EVER VISITED ALASKA.

SOON EVERYTHING WENT NORMAL.


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⏰ Last updated: Feb 08, 2022 ⏰

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