Achillies: after my long journey I heard a boy from this school knew god hand other than me and Mark I decided to go to check it out..
*Achillies gets to the school*
Achillies: *he walked in and was greeted by darren*
Darren: hello! Welcome who may you be?
Achillies: my name?.. I am Achillies old player of Royal academy
Darren: R-Royal academy they are super strong I've heard about them and watched Mark Evans play against them he's so cool!
Achillies: ah.. So you are a fan boy that watched his moves and copied his god hand?
Darren: H-how do you-
Achillies: I know a lot... I have a version of God hand as well and I assume you've been trying to well... Achieve majin the hand?
Darren: yes of course!
Achillies: I myself watched his movements... I could achieve it just with a bit more training
Darren:I'll call my team over and we can start then!!
Achillies: sure..
*After a lot of training and I mean days achillies achieved majin the hand a black version Darren was still trying*
Darren: ALRIGHT SHOOT NOW.
*Darren's teammate shot at achillies*
Achillies: *As he started doing a few different movements than regular majin the hand and something happened* THIS WONT GO IN!!! *a black majin the hand appeared as the shot was stopped and the ball exploded*
Darren: A-awesome....
*After more training aka days*
Darren: I can't... Achillies why can't I...
Achillies: *he gave Darren a pat on the back* don't worry with enough training you will achieve it I promise you.
Darren: *after meeting achillies he slowly started seeing him as a idol*
*and out of nowhere raimon came as they saw achillies*
Jack: YOU!!!...
Achillies: Ah.. Hello raimon nice to finally meet you in person... Please Jack calm down *he went to the raimon players as he and jude still had their bond they gave each other high fives*
Achillies: I'm assuming you are hear cause you heard Darren knew God hand..
Mark: exactly...
Achillies: well me and him been training Mr Evans he's coming close to getting majin the hand and I've already achieved it.
Mark: W-what.. T-thats unbelievable..
Achillies: Jack.. Jude... May we speak in private..
Jude & jack: sure, fine..
*as the 3 players went away from everyone*
Achillies: Jack... I would like to apologise for leaving... I wasn't controlling myself.. I left Ray dark and went on a journey I'm holding the evil in me now...
Jack: its... Gonna take awhile and I mean awhile to forgive you...
Achillies: I understand
Jude: well achilly I'm assuming you remember the old players at Royal you see.. Sam and a few more got heavily injured..
Achillies: W-what.. I didn't know that..... I hope they are okay.. I already know this stuff about the aliens and your match vs zeus.
Jude: of course you do I already knew that hmf..
*As the couch of raimon took interest in achillies...*
Achillies: *he shouted to everyone* HOW ABOUT WE HAVE A FOOTBALL MATCH HERE SOME TRAINING?
*raimon and Darren's school all agreed*
Achillies & Mark: LET'S PLAY FOOTBALL!!!!!!.
YOU ARE READING
inazuma eleven devil's rise
General FictionThis is a inazuma eleven fan fict with a few ocs as well and it's other perspective of the story with my oc achillies, the other perspective is with my friend jacks his account is @Yutoplush (Jack Dragneel)
