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         June 25, 2012, in Buenos Aire Argentina a family of 5 were eating lunch outside on their patio. Mom Luz Maria, dad Jose, daughter Valentina, son Emilio, and Abuela Milagros were all eating beans, rice, steak, and tortillas. They had to run inside because it was starting to rain they didn't want their food to get all soggy. They went inside and finish eating after that the kids went to do their homework mom was washing dishes and dad went back to work and Abuela was watching the tv. The family speaks Spanish and English but granny didn't know much of English words she knew some but not a lot. Valentina was up in her room she love hearing music and exploring the world. Emilio was more chill he loves reading books and watching a lot of movies. Mom was a housewife she works in the house she cleans, cooks, and washes. Grandma was a little too old to work so she will usually just sit outside and look outside or be in the living room and watch the tv. Jose will be out to work almost the whole day. Valentina had a dog named max but it had died not too long ago so she was still a little sad over that she wouldn't eat for a few days but she was getting her energy back and being back happy. Emilio was sad as well but not as much as Valentina. They were about to start 8th grade in a month they were excited to meet new friends.

Early morning at 8:00 am Valentina and Emilio were getting ready to go on their first day of school they were both excited to go to school they got ready ate breakfast and mom gave them their bendicion they went walking to school once they got there they went to their classes once the bell rang they waited for the teacher to instruct what to do. The teacher named flor said ¨everyone is going to present there self first last name and what did you do over the summer¨ everyone got to present there self. Valentina had made some friends she met 2 girlfriends their names were Martina and Julieta. They all got to know each other Emilio, on the other hand, met a new friend as well his name was Maximiliano but they call him Max. School was over they went back home and told mom about their day dad was rushing to the door because he was going to get late to work so he said ¨bye¨ real quick to the whole family. Valentina told mom about her new 2 friends that she made today and Emilio told mom as well about his new friend max. Mom was happy that they had met new friends. Mom meanwhile was making lunch for the family and Abuelita was on the couch watching the tv. Mom said ¨come downstairs kids lunch is ready¨ Valentina and Emilio had ran downstairs they were really hungry. The family was all eating.

The‌ ‌weekend‌ ‌had‌ ‌come‌ ‌and‌ ‌Valentina‌ ‌and‌ ‌her‌ ‌friends‌ ‌had‌ ‌made‌ ‌some‌ ‌plans‌ ‌to‌ ‌go‌ ‌out.‌ ‌Valentina‌ ‌was‌ ‌about‌ ‌to‌ ‌leave‌ ‌but‌ ‌she‌ ‌needed‌ ‌to‌ ‌get‌ ‌her‌ ‌bendicion‌ ‌from‌ ‌mom‌ ‌after‌ ‌the‌ ‌bendicion‌ ‌Valentina‌ ‌left‌ ‌a‌ ‌met-up‌ ‌with‌ ‌her‌ ‌friends‌ ‌Martina‌ ‌and‌ ‌Julieta‌ ‌at‌ ‌the‌ ‌park‌ ‌they‌ ‌walked‌ ‌around‌ ‌then‌ ‌they‌ ‌found‌ ‌this‌ ‌abandoned‌ ‌cemetery‌ ‌it‌ ‌was‌ ‌getting‌ ‌dark.‌ ‌Martina‌ ‌had‌ ‌said‌ ‌¨lets‌ ‌go‌ ‌explore‌ ‌this‌ ‌place¨‌ ‌Julieta‌ ‌and‌ ‌Valentina‌ ‌were‌ ‌scared‌ ‌but‌ ‌they‌ ‌ended‌ ‌up‌ ‌exploring‌ ‌the‌ ‌place‌ ‌Valentina‌ ‌was‌ ‌playing‌ ‌around‌ ‌and‌ ‌saying‌ ‌that‌ ‌the‌ ‌spirits‌ ‌were‌ ‌going‌ ‌to‌ ‌take‌ ‌her‌ ‌and‌ ‌hunt‌ ‌her‌ ‌she‌ ‌was‌ ‌disturbing‌ ‌the‌ ‌stones.‌ ‌

Once‌ ‌they‌ ‌were‌ ‌down‌ ‌they‌ ‌all‌ ‌went‌ ‌back‌ ‌home‌ ‌and‌ ‌Valentina‌ ‌felt‌ ‌a‌ ‌weird‌ ‌vibe‌ ‌like‌ ‌someone‌ ‌was‌ ‌following‌ ‌her.‌ ‌She‌ ‌got‌ ‌home‌ ‌she‌ ‌felt‌ ‌really‌ ‌tired‌ ‌she ‌went‌ ‌to‌ ‌bed‌ ‌she‌ ‌couldn't ‌sleep she‌ ‌felt‌ ‌like‌ ‌something‌ ‌was‌ ‌taking‌ ‌her‌ ‌breath‌ ‌out‌ ‌like‌ ‌she‌ ‌couldn't‌ ‌breathe ‌she‌ ‌got‌ ‌scared ‌and ‌didn't ‌sleep‌ ‌the‌ ‌whole‌ ‌night.‌ ‌Morning‌ ‌came‌ ‌and‌ ‌she‌ ‌was‌ ‌sleeping‌ ‌her‌ ‌mom‌ ‌try‌ ‌waking‌ ‌her‌ ‌up‌ ‌but‌ ‌he‌ ‌didn't ‌want‌ ‌to‌ ‌get‌ ‌u‌ ‌from‌ ‌bed.‌ ‌It‌ ‌was‌ ‌midday ‌already‌ ‌and‌ ‌she‌ ‌finally‌ ‌woke‌ ‌up‌ ‌she‌ ‌saw ‌the‌ ‌time‌ ‌and‌ ‌she‌ ‌said‌ ‌to‌ ‌her‌ ‌¨omg‌ ‌is‌ ‌late¨‌ ‌she‌ ‌ran‌ ‌downstairs‌ ‌her‌ ‌mom,‌ ‌dad,‌ ‌brother,‌ ‌and‌ ‌Abuela ‌was ‌watching‌ ‌movie‌ ‌her‌ ‌mom‌ ‌told‌ ‌her‌ ‌¨why‌ ‌are‌ ‌you‌ ‌waking‌ ‌up‌ ‌so‌ ‌late¨‌ ‌Valentina ‌had‌ ‌said‌ ‌¨I‌ ‌couldn't‌ ‌sleep‌ ‌the‌ ‌whole‌ ‌night‌ ‌something‌ ‌didn't ‌let‌ ‌me‌ ‌sleep¨‌ ‌her‌ ‌mom‌ ‌got‌ ‌worried.‌ ‌

A month had passed Valentina was still feeling bad she still couldn't breathe at night and woke up really when she went to school she would fall asleep in her classes. A lot of bad things had happened to her she told her mom all the bad things that were happening to her. Mom had asked her if she didn't do anything spiritual Valentina had said ¨no¨ but then she remember she had gone into the abandoned cemetery she told her mom right away. Mom asks ¨you went playing with the tones disturbing them saying nothing bad¨ Valentina had said ¨yes I did all of that¨ mom was upset but she went to her mom and told mom about everything so Valentina was going to get clean. Valentina asked how did Abuela know all of this Abuela told her that the same thing had happened to her sister and she earn how to clean a person so she had cleaned valentine a few days passed valentia was feeling way better she told her story to her friends Martina and Julieta. Mom and Abuela told Valentina to never go back to the cemetery. After that everything was fine and Valentina live a happy life. 

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