Naruto : The Ghost

Chapter 1

Undergoing Heavy Re-Wrting, Chapter 1 Done

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It was truly a dark night. It looked like the sun and nature had caught on to the absolute trade that was about to take place and purposely made the day itself shine bright. Sometimes nature can be cruel, so cruel that some people lose the will to live their lives and commit suicide.

It looks as though people think that taking their lives would solve their problems, but that's just not the answer. It is well said that "haste makes waste". The reason why most people choose to kill themselves when they have no money is because of those who do it. They're greedy; they want something from other people and are willing to give them the time to get it. Those people who decide to throw away what little value they have in life just simply don't know how to live anymore.

Life doesn't care if you've lost your job, family, or money. All life cares about is getting what it wants, which is you. That's how many times life has cheated us out of our lives. If life really didn't care, then we wouldn't die in such a cruel way. And if life did care, then why didn't we live our lives with no tension whatsoever?


That's just the one rule of nature. It never forgives nor lets go of those who hurt others. In fact, it is the same for animals. No matter what animal it is, it can always feel like someone is hurting or abusing its kind. That's why animals will protect the innocent with their lives if need be.

So it's very natural that humans should be protective of each other. Because it doesn't matter how you look at it, everyone's life matters. You're not here today for yourself. Tomorrow may come sooner than you expect.
I stood there, staring into the abyss of space in my own little bubble, while the corpse of the love of my life grew colder and colder in my arms.

The blood Leaving her body and getting soaked in my clothes Her heartbeat became slower and slower. The sight of the blood soaking through her clothing and slowly dripping down her skin. The smell of death that lingered around her lifeless form.

She wasn't even breathing and her face was cold, but she still had some beauty left, despite all these gruesome things she'd seen and experienced before. As much as I loved her, it was obvious to me that she was gone now, and it hurt like hell. My chest tightened and I felt the tears welling up as I held her in my arms, feeling the pain of losing her all over again.

Her soft, brownish-black hair stuck to her forehead as she lay limp in my arms. I couldn't stop my cries from coming out. It was so hard to hold onto her like this without having any sort of control over what was happening. All of the energy and emotions that filled me were suddenly drained, leaving me weak.

After a few more minutes of sobbing, I let out a bloodcurling scream that could've been heard from miles away. I clutched onto her tighter. "No, please don't leave me," I pleaded desperately. I can't... I won't be able to do this without you. " My whole world was crashing down around me as my emotions were taken over completely.

... I was in shock and my vision started to get blurry. I felt her heart beating and everything faded away, leaving me alone with only my thoughts and memories left of my love. A single tear fell onto the back of my hand where she used to lie resting in her beautiful brown locks of hair.

Everything was silent, and I had nothing to cling onto. Nothing but my feelings, thoughts, and grief. I'm still crying as it comes flooding out of my eyes in an almost uncontrollable manner. I feel myself being ripped away from reality, like the world is falling apart.
Suddenly, a bright light blinds me for a couple seconds. I can see the ground below, people passing me by, and the moon and stars above. It's beautiful, like every dream I've had before. Suddenly, I can hear screaming, but it takes me a moment to realise that it's mine. My throat started to close, and the next thing I knew, the wind knocked me onto my knees. Everything around me starts going blurry again, and I try to hold onto everything around me. There are tears streaming down my cheeks and I feel sick, like I might vomit. Suddenly, I hear footsteps behind me, and before I know it, someone grabs my shoulder and turns me around. I look in front of me and it's another familiar face. It was kakashi.

Before even giving me a moment to think through the situation, Kakashi hugs me tightly and begins to cry on my shoulder. I take some time to process the situation, and I wrap my arms around him as he continues to sob on me.

... I can't help but feel sorry for him, as he must have been hurting too. "You're okay...it's all going to be okay." I whisper in his ear, trying my best to comfort him as he holds me in his arms. I'm afraid I might break down at any second if he pulls away, and I can't handle that right now. We stay like that for what feels like hours until Kakashi lets go of me and wipes his tearstained cheeks. He looked over my shoulder in a daze. I followed his gaze and saw that I was the only person besides him.

.. It took me a good minute to process everything that happened, and before I knew it, my vision started to clear, and I couldn't help but notice how sad and scared Kakashi looked. I know he doesn't like to show his weaknesses to anyone, especially if they aren't himself, but I guess this situation changed everything.

"Come on, let's head home," he says, trying to sound positive but failing miserably. Kakashi turned his head away from my gaze and tried to hide his grief and suffering from me like always.

I felt like there was an internal war going on inside of me about what to do. The whole 2 years with Madara, his ideology, his plans, and his way to real peace came crawiling back in my mind. And I, at that moment, stopped walking completely and focused my whole attention on my internal conflict.

I can easily knock Kakashi out if I wanted to, thanks to the training I got from Madara. And the fact that he made my entire right side regenrate from the Gedo Mazo and the strength boost I got from that is also all but in my favour.

I don't clearly remember anything, but when I woke up, I was shocked to see my body. Because I thought that my entire right half would be completely crushed by that humongous rock and therefore I would surely die, but I had my whole body brand new without even a single scratch, and the interesting thing was that my physical attributes were inhanced from Low-Jonin level to Kage Level.

Madara told me that since my physical attributes have already been branded, I won't die as long as I'm protected from all enemies with chakra attacks. But I still had no idea how my right side could still work after such a huge amount of damage done to it, and how did Madara heal it? Did he just make it better? I've always wondered about that. I mean, I've always wondered how my body could be healed so quickly after getting beat up by a huge ass rock, but Madara has always been cryptic and mysterious and always gives me vague answers.

I mean, I understand that he's doing his job, but seriously, I just want to know the truth, and honestly, I'm pretty sure that the only way for me to know is by asking him directly, which is the hardest part considering I don't want to seem nosy because that would be the worst possible thing I could do.

But that should be my least worry for now. Rin is dead, and as much as I don't want to accept that fact, that's the reality.

The most he gained from Madara was knowledge and wisdom. Madara knew so much about everything that he was almost convinced he was a ghost or, worse, a demon. Madara knew so much about everything that he was almost convinced he was a ghost or, worse, a demon. What was more shocking about the whole situation was the fact that he seemed to possess a human soul as he was very much alive and well.

Obito shook his head internally, and in reality, he turned his head from the previous downward-ward position to upward. He saw Kakashi Kakashi's gaze fixed on him and the entirety of events happening came crashing down on him. He had no idea what to say or or what to tell him to calm him down, and at times like these he wished that he had spoken sooner to Rin, if only to prevent what happened to her from ever happening. The worst part is that she probably wouldn't have died if he had kept his mouth shut; she'd be alive.

He felt a sense of anger building within him towards Kakashi Kakashi for bringing all this pain to Rin. The guilt was eating him up inside and he wanted nothing more than to take it upon himself to find and punish KakashiKakashi as he deserved for all he did to her. If it weren't for Madara stopping him though, Rin's lifeless body would have fallen down to the floor in the most horrific way imaginable. Obito couldn't bare to imagine the thought of her dying like that because she was his best friend and he was hers. His stomach churned as the images of the horrible scene played themselves out in his mind.

But all that anger disappeared as he heard Kakashi say those words. words. I'm S-s-sorry,S-s-sorry, O-obito. "O-obito." He stuttered through clenched teeth while struggling to keep himself composed. Tears slowly began to pour from his grey eyes, and a few stray droplets landed on the floor beside them. Obito looked in the direction of Rin Rin, who was lying lifelessly on the ground, and kakashi continued.

"I didn't expect her to j-jump in front of my c-chidori and I couldn't stop it." Kakashi began to cry furiously after that, and ObitoObito also felt his chest getting heavier.

As Kakashi spoke the last sentence, Obito lost the ability to breathe. He began to choke on his own tears as he stood completely frozen. This entire time, Kakashi had never once uttered those words, and the way he said them was so soft and low that the other two didn't hear them at all. Kakashi's voice sounded broken as he sobbed uncontrollably whilst trying hard not to cry out loudly. All those years that KakashiKakashi had tried to protect Rin were the worst years of his life, yet she still died protecting him, and Obito couldn't bear the pain of seeing his best friend die all over again.
"Kakashi.. I'll be fine. Don't worry. " Kakashi managed to force out a smile after hearing Obito's response, and although it sounded weak and frail, it gave him enough hope to lift himself off from the tonnes of guilt he felt right there, even if it was a little.

Obito's mind began to spin and the thoughts of revenge he had on the world began to get the better of him, and he decided right there and then that. 'He will create peace the hard way.'
He closed his eyes tightly, took a deep breath, and opened them again.

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Thats it for the first chapter of Re-Write. And if you're reading for the first time then the next chapter won't make any sense. Wait till i update the next one.

Here's Obito's Current Look

(Btw, Obito has His Dms, Madara exchange kakashi's eye with his when he was sleeping on night. This took place before obito woke up)