Hi, this is my first Xreader. Please tell me what I need to improve on, and as always I'm open to story suggestions. I hope you enjoy it.
WARNING: contains rape and violence
Reader's POV
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It was a Friday night, I was hanging out with the boys and their girlfriends. Gabby invited me to join, we had been friends since kindergarten. We gathered around Eddie's living room to play Drink or Dare.
"(your name) Drink or Dare," shouted Josh from across the room "Dare," I said smirking. "I dare you..." Josh began, "to dump a cup of cold water on your crush," he said giggling. I blushed as I got up and got a glass of water. I walked over to Narrator, and dumped the water over his head. Just as I went to sit back down, "Oh no you don't," Narrator said as he pulled me into his lap playfully. I sat there contently on his lap for the rest of the game, leaning back into his chest.
Almost everyone, including myself, had gotten drunk. Mully worst of all, Narrator however, only had 2 or 3 shots so he wasn't very drunk. We all stayed the night at Eddie's house being too drunk to drive home. We all made our way to different rooms, Narrator took the room to my right, and Mully took the room to my left. I closed the door and climbed into bed falling asleep.
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A few hours later
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I woke up to get a drink of water. I was on my way to the kitchen when Mully stopped me in the hall. He suddenly cornered me and pushed me against the wall. "He must still be drunk," I thought, pushing him away. But he pinned me back against the wall and started to bite and suck on my neck. I yelped in alarm as he began trying to take off my clothes.
Narrator's POV
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I heard a strange sound coming from the hall outside my door. I got up and went to see what it was. I opened the door and saw Mully trying to force himself onto (your name). He was pinning her to the wall, biting and sucking on her neck. She was obviously terrified and confused. I charged up and grabbed Mully aggressively, and pulled him off of her. "LEAVE HER THE FUCK ALONE MULLY," Narrator yelled which caused Mully to run back to his room. I followed him and proceeded to beat the shit out of him. After that I walked back to where she was still crying on the floor.
I picked up (your name), and brought her into my room. I set her down on the bed next to me and she crumpled into a sobbing mess, still clinging onto me. I just sat there and held her for a while, she was shaking and breathing heavily, her heart pounding in her chest. "It's ok honey bunches," I said trying to calm her down, "I won't let him hurt you." She looked up at me with her beautiful hazel nut eyes, holding me close.
Reader's POV
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I looked up into Narrator's deep, ocean blue eyes. "Thank you for saving me," I said "I love you." To my surprise he responded "I love you too (your name)," he said back to me. He laid me onto bed, laying next to me. I soon fell asleep in his comforting arms. Narrator gave me a sweet and tender kiss on my forehead "Good night honey bunches, I love you," he said in his sexy deep narrator voice. He fell asleep next to me, still holding me in his arms.
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The next day
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3rd Person POV
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They woke up together, went downstairs, and told the others what Mully had done to (your name) that night. They were all shocked and angry at Mully, whose face was bright red in embarrassment. In the end, everyone eventually forgave Mully. He was their friend, and anyways he was extremely drunk and not in control of himself. (your name) and Narrator forgave him but they were still a little bit weary around him, which Mully could understand why.
A few days later Narrator had asked (your name) to be his girlfriend, she happily accepted. They told the rest of the boys, who congratulated them. And from then on Narrator and (your name) had a good life together.
Please tell me how to improve. I will also be taking ideas for stories. Comment your ideas for me to improve, and ideas for stories in this paragraph. Thank you, and I hope you enjoyed.
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