The Bardock Story (First Draft)

Chapter 1

Bardocks runing as fast as he can and he grabs his son and sends him to a planet called earth, before he would tell the saiyans about Frieza, after that he runs to the saiyans."we have to destroy Frieza guys he killed my squad and he said we are next please we have to do something."Bardock said. " Right ok everyone lets go."One of the Saiyans said smiling. They all run outside and charged Freiza and the minions of Frieza didnt last long even Zarbon, and Dordia to retreat and by then Frieza was outside and used a Death Beam and killed 10 saiyans." you bastered!"Bardock said angrily. Bardock charged Frieza and Frieza knocked him away like a fly and Bardock gets angry but he keeps his cool by then Frieza blasted another death beam and then killed the rest of the remaining saiyans exept Bardock is now inferihatied and starts to glow and eletricty runs down him."YOU YOU MONSTER, YOU BASTERDDDDD AHHHHHHHHHHHH."Bardock said and now reach a level that he has reached before he recently went back in the past and saved the old planet vegeta or planet plant which that is where he first transform and figured out how to go back in time and go into the future with the powers from the one alien from the planet that his squad took over." What is the legend true there real a a ..Super..Saiyan.."Frieza said.  " Yeah Frieza your rule is now come to an end I will kill you." Bardock said.