The Bardock Story (First Draft)

Chapter 2

Bardock charges Frieza and then Zarbon and Dodoria come out and defend Frieza so Bardock Kicks them both in half and Frieza scared backs away and Bardock runs at him and kicks his face and punches his gut and then blastes Friezas torso."thats for Fasha," Bardock said while punching Frieza numerously," thats for borgos," and now Bardock grabs Frieza and throws him on the ship punching his face hard,"thats for Shugesh," and now Bardocks exetremly mad and kicks Freiza in the gut and punches Friezas face and then his gut and charges a huge blast,"and this is for tora." Bardock says while blasting Freiza and Frieza is now disentagrated so Bardock goes back to planet vegeta and gathers the,remaining saiyans like Nappa,Kid Vegeta, and King Vegeta."How did you do that Bardock you, you were a low class saiyan." King Vegeta said.
"Everyone has the power inside of them to become this if your a saiyan and you are able to unlock the full potiental you can transform."Bardock said."Makes sense." Nappa said. "ok ok but Bardock your past the elites your like 500000 of our elites combined you should be the king the strongest saiyan should be the strongest." Kid Vegeta said." Thanks kid but im good and wheres Raditz."Bardock said.