One DIrection Concert?

This is another One of my papers that i already turned in. I do a lot of One DIrection papers when we have to write fictional stories or papers. BTW I got 10 out of 10 for this paper.

Hey Mom and Dad,

You know what I wouold absolutley LOVE!!!!!!!!!! To go to a One Direction Concert. It would be the happiest moment of my life. It would be the best first concert anyone has ever had. I also wouldn't ask for any One DIrection merchandise for a while.

I know the tickets are expensive but i will work it oof. I won't ask for any One DIrection merchandise for at least 2 months or longer. I will behave for a very long time like a month without you getting mad at me. I'll get good grades for the rest of the year the whole year. All A's and little B's.

I would be sooo happy for a long long long time. The happier I am the happier you are right? And when I'm happy I behave and give attitude because I won't be all cranky and mad. Also (You'll love this one) I won't get mad at my brother as easily because I'll be too happy to be mad at him.

It would be the best first concert ever!!!!! I wouldn't stop talkingn about how much I love both of you. It has always been my dream to go to one of their concerts as my first concert ever since i became their fan. Also I might be able to meet them at the meet and greet after the concert which would make the concert even better.

So do you think I could go to the concert? You wouldn't regrete it, I promise. Please let me go to the concert. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG!!! So I'm watching 20 20 and it is about the 5 year old kid in the bunker all week. It's so sad i'm about to cry. Anyways if you are trying to convince your parents to let you go to the concert her is a good paper to show them.