Special one(Angel Knights)original draft

The beginning

(Maggie)

I got out of school and today was my birthday so as I went home my mom told me that the me, my brother, older sister, her and my dad was going to someplace to eat.

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Time skip

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        As me and my family walked out to the van a robber came with a gun a pointed at us.

and yelled "Give Me Your Money!" Before one of my family responded I remembered that my family only had a little cash on them and needed it for something really important .

so I yelled "no!" 

And the robber responded yelling and grabbing me on my collar of my shirt "what did you say to me!" Yelling at my face

 I responded "I said no" the robber hitted me and thowed me on the ground (luckily a person saw what was going on and called the police without the robber noticing) i was about to get up when my mom begged not to hurt me and he pointed a gun at my mom 

and said "I will kill you if you will not give me your money" while he was detracted I jumped in him holding on and he thowed me off and shot me on my left leg and I sceamed in pain and he grabbed my hair and I thought I'm not going down in a fight no manner what I will protect my family so I kicked him hand with my right leg and he let go my hair and punched him hard in the face. He ran at me and pinned me down and shot my left leg again and screamed in pain also I was able to push him off of me when I pushed him off he shot my right arm and I screamed in pain once again. 

I ran at him and was able to take the gun and shot him in the arm and the leg once after that I looked at my family surprise that I was able to to that then I heared the police came and as soon as I turned to look at the police officer everything turn black and I fainted.

Sorry I have to stop here I have to go to bed I hoped you liked it so far!!