(Maggie) i woken up at the hospital my mom at my crying in tears of joy and hugging me
I asked" mom why are you crying ?"
and she said "im happy that your alive " then I remembered what happened I started to cry in fear then my mom hugs me again then everything turns black.
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(Mom)
I huged my daughter again then all of a sudden I heared the falt beep on the monter(I don't know what called I'm just guessing) then the doctors came in .
I yell " do something !" and I started to cry while the doctors try to bring her back to life but it didnt work I run to maggie crying holding her in my arms Then I try to bring her back to life then I hear the beep on the montor beeping again I was happy that my daughter didn't die so early in life I wanted her to enjoy it.
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(Maggie)
When everything turn black I saw a light and I started to walk to the light but something stop me that I saw it was god holding his hand out to me I try to grap his hand but all a sudden I get sucked into a other light and I waken up in my hospital bed my mom gone then all a sudden (didn't notice the last time I woke up) i notice that my right arm and my left leg gone and I scream in fear and I hear the door slam open and a nurse walks in paniced by my scream
And saying "what's wrong!" Then notices that everythings ok then I ask what happened to my arm and my leg
the nurse said "the doctors had to cut your arm and leg off because your wounds got invective "
and ask "is their anything else you want or want to ask?"
i said " no" then the nurse left then I remembered a anime called full metal alchemist and that Ed had auto mail( basiclly it is a metal arm or leg and I do like anime!and video game so let's get back to the story!) then all a sudden I was in where Ed lived......
Author: I have to stop here because It 4 in the morning and I Do like anime yay! so seeeee yeah!!
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Special one(Angel Knights)original draft
FantasyWell this is practically the original draft of the story when my writing was horrible now being told my writing is good once again I think I'm going to give it a other shot to write it a way now that I want it soo you may hate me but all well...