Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles...Oh and that one strange girl?

Can you hear me?

There wasn't much to do under the surfice, hence why Raphael was wandering and exploring the sewers when he happened upon a small figure propped up on the sewer wall. Rushing over to the figure in a slight panic he saw the figure in a closer way, noticing the the poor thing was marrid with cuts and bruses and breathing deeply. It was around his size but a different shape, not so suprising being as he was a munant turtle. Even though he was the strongest of his brothers this figure was complately dead wheight and he wasn't going to be able to carry it to the lair, but needless to say that he still tryed. When only successful in moving the figure a small distance away, he realised that he would need his brothers' help.

"Can you hear me?"He asked, but receved only a nod and a small whimper in answer."I'll be back real quick, I promiss, okay?" And with another nod he was off runing towards the lair to get his three other brothers to help him.

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"It's not too far away now, hurry!"Said Raph jogging a good four feet in front of his brothers who seemed a little disinterested in where and why they where going as Raphael had not given an explanation or motive as to why theyfound themselfs wondering the sewers;but as they cought a glimps of what he was fussing over they soon ran to try and aid him in his struggle to get the poor thing to the lair.

As a team they hefted the figure onto their shells and carrid, what they now asumed to be a seven year old girl,as fast as they could to the lair, for Splinter to treat her cuts and wounds.

I think I'm going to write from the girls point of veiw from now on. How's that sound? Or should I keep it in third person? Leave comment? Ask questions?

Diolch yn fawr fawr iawn, Hwyl am y tro! Dwi'n garry chi!

P.S sory if it's a little short!