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Dough pov:
i was in the middle of nowhere then i saw a shadow in front of me

???: "Oh! Another one. How nice to have some company again."
...
???:"Come over here. Let's have a look at you..."
*I Came forward to this unkown entity*
???:"You disappoint me love. You really do... So many fears... So many desires... I thought you'd be bigger."
huh?
???:Don't look so confused... I know everything you've got hidden in that brain of yours. I know all the terrible things you've done. So many good intentions laid to waste... I can see the regret, eating away at your soul..."

...

??? : .. but you are a perfect victim for me

What do you mean!? *in a shock expression*

???: .... oh i meant this!
Dough: *and i felt something i see that my hands and waist are in chain*

ረቿፕ ጠቿ ኗዐ

PLEASE!?

*Then i passes out realizing i cant open my eyes and some shield sorround me full of negative thoughts*

*Realized I can't get out but my soul can*

???: Good now you what to do *with an evil grin*

Dough : when I enter. I can see a bloody monkey icon on the portal

*This is called monkey business huh*

*Just watch chapter 1 of this ignore the intro of it lol*

After my lifeless me collect all the soul shard  and I heard a male voice...

???: "There's no escape for you, mortal!"

Then my still version of me there run out to the portal then i spoke

Spirit Dough: Help me please

Jeff [murder monkey 1] : who the banana is this!?

S! Dough: I Know I have a lot to explain I have no time to talk but I need you please to help me that is not me
Jeff [ murder monkey 1]: and I'm gonna know your not a  threat to us ..

.....

Hello are you here?

S! Dough: just take the ρꪖρꫀ𝘳... i have to go now

....
*Meanwhile in the ballroom*

Malak: "Bierce! Still so persistent after all this time... Do not listen to her, mortal. She's just using you. Give her the ring and there will be... Consequences."

Bierce: ignore him and come over here ...

Narrator: umm so P Doug got the ring power  and he enter the portal btw

Malak pov shall we... (I mean I like this antagonist demon here lemao let's got the story anyways)

Jeff: uhh boss

Malak: what do you want now?

Jeff : some spirit just sent this ...

*Malak took the paper and ...*

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Malak ask

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Malak ask

Who gave you this?

It was a random spirit sir

Very well Im gonna keep this maybe this sprit is clearly saying something

And is the sprit still there?

Jeff murder monkey 1: No sir he said
He can't communicate much sir I think the spirit is following the mortal
Sir...

Malak: ok you may leave

Jeff murder monkey 1: yes sir ...

--------------------------------------------------------Ik still bad writing and inspired by Dark Deception: Malevolent HellfireBy damingdollface

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Ik still bad writing and inspired by
Dark Deception: Malevolent Hellfire
By damingdollface. And please update the book it was good I wanna see the mama bear stage T-T it was a good book and this is just In my mind with a twist actually when I read dark Deception fanfiction I have been having my own au of each time that I read but I hope you guys enjoy byeeee d
Stay happy and stay healthy and stay safe byeeeee my little nature's UwU

And if you want to read Dark Deception: Malevolent Hellfire by damingdollface here ya go read it is good: https://www.wattpad.com/story/306030745?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=NatureLilygamer&wp_originator=SGOXxi4Tfw4V%2FGNjObZAXYEJcLf93xPnx6puQtH28K%2BEygq8l%2B%2BF4cn2oXZxCRuLgwTSqOTN81tC7e2RXsLHSCqTSXk6E7LURzBzGp%2BMVI5WThdC59aNFEc0qe8NU3S%2F

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