NOT HOME TOWN

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*All lot of people were surrounding Jackie and all the peoples were fully equipped my heavy armours and guns*

Jackie:where am I?
Erik:just follow me

*Walks*

*A random person asked him who is he*
Erik:you won't believe he is Jackie Krokale
????:WHAT!!!! KROKALE?!!

*Everyone around him bows*

Jackie:what's going on?where am I?why is everyone bowing?
Erik:your dad will answer all your questions

*says in shocked voice*
Jackie:my dad?what b- bu- but he died
Erik:no he didn't
Jackie:huh

*After that he saw a big city*

Jackie:what is this place
Erik:we call it Asmoleius
Jackie:Asmolius?
Erik:it's a city made by your dad

Jackie:m-m- my dad m- made a city
Erik:there is a lot to tell you
Jackie:are we going to meet my dad
Erik:no not today
Jackie:then?
Erik:tomorrow we will meet him today we will rest in the hotel
Jackie:but where is my dad
Erik:you see that moon type thing

Jackie:m-m- my dad m- made a cityErik:there is a lot to tell youJackie:are we going to meet my dadErik:no not today Jackie:then?Erik:tomorrow we will meet him today we will rest in the hotelJackie:but where is my dadErik:you see that moon type thing

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Jackie:yes
Erik:he is in there
Jackie:what!
Erik:he owns that too
Jackie:wa-wa- what did he made it too
Erik:no the whole idea of making it was his and he made the structure and I did the rest
Jackie:what the-

Erik:the hotel came

Jackie:this is the hotel Erik:just wait see the inside

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Jackie:this is the hotel
Erik:just wait see the inside

*Erik and Jackie got in an elevator and got down*

*Erik and Jackie got in an elevator and got down*

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The Lobby of the hotel was too luxurious

The Lobby of the hotel was too luxurious

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*Erik got the best room in the hotel*

Jackie:now I see why this the best hotel in this city
Erik:let's go to the room we got

*walks to the room they got*

Erik:so this is our room

Jackie:this room is our room!Erik:yes,we will stay a night here then will meet your dad tomorrowJackie:yeah,my dad

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Jackie:this room is our room!
Erik:yes,we will stay a night here then will meet your dad tomorrow
Jackie:yeah,my dad

Jackie was thinking*

How do my dad look like do they have beard ah I don't think so anyways let's find out tomorrow

*Lead on the bed and slept*

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⏰ Last updated: May 03, 2022 ⏰

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