Chapter 2:Return of the Maelstrom

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Now to address a few things since I got at least 3 people asking about these: 1) Every girl that Naruto kissed at the end of chapter 1 is going with Naruto to Konoha because they are in a relationship with him, Rukia is just the only one engaged to him at the moment.


2) I don't know why people are freaking out about me adding characters from different items to this. They were there for techniques and skills training: Naruto will not have Reiatsu, he will not have Pieces of Eden, he will not have magic, he will not have Haki (I am going to let armament be a secret technique of the Samurai), he's not going to have the force, he's not going to have Materia, or anything else from those characters besides combat skills so why is it an issue?! For the women, I've stated this in other fics, it gets boring doing the same women over and over again!

3) Naruto is not going to kill Minato or Kushina. They aren't going to be family to him, but he's not going to kill them. I'm also going to say that NO, Naruto is not going to sleep with his sister or his mother. Normally I would say possibly, but it doesn't fit with this setting (in my opinion). Now if someone wants to try and convince me otherwise about having Kushina or Keyone in Naruto's harem, then by all means try but do not get defensive or aggressive if I do not accept your arguments.

4) I'm not going to say who the main enemy is as it pertains to some plans I have for Naruto, so you will just have to wait and see.

To Iolkid or lolkid (can't tell from how FF makes the letters look), I understand that the Sannin is not an official rank, but I am not the first or even top 50 to use it as such as the running gag is that Konoha embraced the titles and it is even joked in the Naruto series that Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura are the next Sannin. As for it being an insult to Hiruzen, it's really not since I put that his reserves were dropped from Sannin level and because he wasn't exactly training and staying in shape and he struggled in a fight with Orochimaru, he wasn't still at Kage level. Plus he was getting to be an old man so he's not going to have the strength he had in his prime. It was payment for the Shinigami not taking his soul, he just lost a chunk of strength putting his reserves at Jonin level instead of Sannin since that was what he let his body fall to before the summoning. So, it's not an insult or anything to Hiruzen or the other Kage since it's actually a compliment that his reserves when lowered were at the level of a Jonin at his age. I mean, Kakashi's reserves are a joke and he was still made Hokage despite falling from an Anbu/border S rank shinobi to his Jonin self that he was in the anime so obviously reserves aren't that big of a deal when it comes to Kage. There's also the fact that all three Sannin were capable of becoming a Kage and Tsunade did even though only Jiraiya and Orochimaru still trained to stay in shape and she let her skills outside of medical arts slip.

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Fire Country: Just outside Konoha

Naruto and his girls were walking through the forest surrounding Konoha with the women taking in the sights since they mostly lived in Iron Country which was a lot of snow with some pop ups of spring to enjoy, but not a full forest of summer time trees to see and experience. Naruto merely stared straight ahead towards the ever-nearing gate as they walked, though he did speak to his girls to ensure they didn't worry about him.

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