Commodious City

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Commodious City, Present day


If you're looking for a fresh start to something great, showing off your talent(s), creating a name for yourself, and living the life you have always dreamed of. People from all over the world (always say or tell or mention) commodious city always known to be,


A Perfect Utopia...

The moment you step foot onto the streets, you're greeted with smiling faces, laughter, music, and numerous amounts of joy from anywhere and everyone. Buildings range in any size and can be a place of business, a store, or even a lovely apartment you can soon call home. The possibilities are endless in Commodious. Somedays will be quite busy, but can you blame anyone? No! It only means the place is booming with tourists! Cause who wouldn't want to come and see, feel, and witness such an amazing place! Not to mention the 24/7 protection from our amazing heroes who sore through the skies, keeping us safe. I tell you, ask anyone, and they'll have to say the same.


"Commodious City is A Perfect Utopia...Except, it's not.


No one knows the true origins of how mankind developed such abilities, whether it be flight, strength, etc. Was it made? Were we born with them? Was it a gift from God? Nevertheless, this was the norm and still is. We were unified by one single thing. That was until one being filled with hate and greed wanted it all. Dividing one another with false narratives to take not only the lives of others but their abilities for their manipulative use. Which leads us to the present day of -Commodious City, Downside ameliorate: 2 am


June/30/8120By this hour, others are sound asleep, working overnight or parting until they pass out, unlike 'Connor Deyanira', limping their way back from a night of inconvenience. Connor is a fair man, goes by a certain morals they have created, along with two other individuals. They see fit as to if I help you, you help me and so on. Coming from a different background they aren't your typical friendly citizen. They're quick-witted, a wise guy, ladies man and can be said to be number one for many reasons.


As they make their way on the outskirts of the city, following a path of an eerie corroding freeway is Downside Ameliorate. Unlike its better counterpart, Ameliorate falls. A city slowly decaying the more they are silenced. The further you go, you'll cease to exist. It once was beautiful... a beautiful city.


Slowly descent into the foggy streets, the sounds of several women are heard whistling from the nearest building. A few girls hanging out on the fire escape in some rather revealing clothes are giggling amongst themselves and blowing kisses his way. Above them was a sign that read 'The Sordid Vila'. Like a modern-day saloon but possibly more crude. Connor eventually spoke up."Take a picture, ladies; it will surely last longer." Winking as a bonus. The girls began whaling with laughter and cheer from the reciprocated energy. While one of the girls from behind steps closer to the railing. The sight of her takes his breath away. 'Clara Rubio', her name is known very well within the community, but especially to him. It also doesn't help when you live in a small city. She tells the others to quiet down. Not wanting to stir up the people asleep."Why don't you come up to my room, hun? I'm sure you're tired and want to rest. Plus, if my observation is correct, it looks like you're pretty banged up."


"Well, I wouldn't be opposed to that. Although I have a rather bad feeling, someone else would be very crossed with me and end in my death." Trying to suppress their laughter, he continued. "So I'll take my chances on staying alive, let alone prepare myself for an angry teen at home.""That being said, if you don't want to get an ear full, I suggest you ladies go to bed." With a quick goodbye, Connor once again continued his journey. It took longer than he would have liked. As Clara stated, they 'really' were not in the best of shape and the fog wasn't letting up. Regretting to not take her offer.

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⏰ Last updated: Jan 08, 2023 ⏰

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