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MichaelsBootyFlake

Title

The title is simple but noticeable. I like it.

Cover

I love the title on the cover it's great

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I love the title on the cover it's great. But nothing else stands out about the cover.

Summary

I don't think that it needs the top quote. Other than that it is good.

Overall thoughts

I am going to do something different with this review than I have with others. I'm just going to share my overall thoughts.

I like this story. The plot is interesting. The descriptions are excellent. I just feel it would get far more reads if you used original characters.

The plot is certainly original enough that it would definitely work with original characters.

It's very interesting story.

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