4 cats 4 elements

chapter 1

Chapter 1
Edit: hey guys, so I have not been writing a lot and I apologize, so if you are waiting for more or if you don't give a shet, that's okay, I am just proud of what I have written :)

Ravenpaws POV

word count:  774

Okay Ravenpaw, lets go with your kin to explore the territory." Icewhisker had been appointed to Ravenpaw as her mentor.  Ravenpaw nodded. She felt sorry for the tom, he had to get a cat who couldn't talk. alot of the time Ravenpaw would have to skip out on playtime in the nursery because she would have to go to the medicine cats den to practice her speech.

" Hi Ravenpaw, we can go together!" Sunpaw said as he bounced up and down. Ravenpaw nodded.

"Alright everyone here," Patchclaw meowed from the front of the patrol.  " Okay lets get going." She lead the way out of the camp. Ravenpaw felt scared outside of the camp. she had always been able to lock her anxious feelings inside the camp, but once they were outside she felt like it was way worse. Otterpaw walked up to her. Yes finally.

"Hi, are you ok?" Otterpaw looked considered for her sister. She nodded.

" Well Sunpaw and Thistlepaw were talking again about the-you-know-what, and they " Forgot" to tell us. what do they think talking about it without u-" otterpaw was stopped by her mentor.

" Otterpaw if you won't  close your mouth you are going to scare the prey." Fufftail meowed at her apprentice. Ravenpaw chuckled. Otterpaw rolled her eye's like she always did, and went on with the patrol.

They went from the one side of the territory to the other when the patrol stopped.

" Okay this is were I want to apperentice's split up. Icewhisker take your apprentice to the breeze clan territory, Fufftail to the pond, Maplepelt to the Thunderpath and   Spoteye, you and your apprentice can join Maplepelt." They split up. Her brother and Sunpaw got to go to the thunderpath while Ravenpaw was stuck with the patrolling part. 

They walked along the boarder, Icewhisker sometimes reminding her things when Ravenpaw heard someone, something. Icewhisker flicked his tail to crouch, while she went through the tall grass to find the thing. Icewhisker pounced, when Ravenpaw heard someone spring to surprise.

" Icewhisker! It's so good to see you!" Icewhisker stood infont of the tom, purring.

" Oh my, yes it's great to see you. I am so sorry I pounced I wasn't thinking it was going to be you, Thunderpelt." Thunderpelt?! Ravenpaw thought about the tom, who was her mothers brother. Icewhisker flicked his to get Ravenpaw up.

" This is my apprentice Ravenpaw." Thunderpelt looked at her with studying eye's. 

" You look like my sister. Are you her kit?" Ravenpaw nodded. The large tom smiled.

" Thats great! I always wanted to be at the birth of my sisters kits, but I had to take care of some other things." He flicked his tail to the she-cat that was beside him. Ravenpaw looked at the she-cat, she had two kits, about 2 moons old. Ravenpaw felt her eye's become large. Only 2 moons and went on a tripe?!

" I knew you must have gotten into trouble," Ice whisker bowed his head to the she-cat. " they are darn cute though. what are you doing with them?" Thunderpelt looked at the she-cat with worry.

" I was hoping that we could raise them as clan cats." There was a pause.

" Well I don't know about that. I mean, they have clan blood, but what would Honeystar think?" Icewhisker said. ravenpaw looked at the kits. 2 toms.

" There names are Buddkit, and Deerkit." The she-cat said as though she saw Ravenpaw look at them. Ravenpaw smiled. the she-cat looked at Ravenpaw.

" I remember your mother. you are identical." Ravenpaw nodded, alot of people said that.

they took the mates and kits to the camp where they soon saw Echoheart and Ravenpaws siblings.

" Thunderpelt! I thought I would never see you again!" Echoheart touched noses with her brother.

" I see you met our kit." Ravenpaw heard her fathers voice from behind her.  Thunderpelt nodded.

" I see you came around." There was a harsh tone in his voice.   Ravenpaw turned around to see the others behind her.

" Hi, how was your time?" Sunkit bounced beside Thistlepaw. She moved her mouth in a way to say good. Echoheart sat beside the apprentices.

" These are my kits. Ravenpaw, you already met, Thistlepaw, and Otterpaw." Thunderpelt smiled and looked at Sunkit, suddenly lost his smile.

" and this is.... this is Lightpounces kit, Sunpaw." Thunderpelt looked at Echoheart sadness welling in there eye's. Sunpaw looked down at his paws.

" You kits go get some fresh kill." Echoheart flicked her tail. Ravenpaw ran to Sunpaw and ran her tail down his spine as they walked.