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The beautiful girl woke up with joy in her mind. She went to school with all the other girls and boys. She was innocent and harmless. She would never hurt a fly. With the name of Jane and only 14 years old. She had long, wavy, brown hair and the face of an angel. Then one morning her mother told her "we're moving". She was thrilled to see different things other than what she sees everyday. But sad to say goodbye to her friends. In about two weeks they were packed and ready to go. The moving truck was stuffed with her and her mothers belongings. Three days later they arrived at their brand new home in sunny California. She got out of the car and jolted into the big sky blue house. She had never been this happy. She couldnt wait to meet new neighbors and explore. After everything was unpacked and they were all settled in she asked "can i meet some of our new neighbors"? Her mother replied "yes be back in an hour dinner will be ready". She knocked on many doors all around the neighborhood. She came up to the final house. This house was not like the other clean well kept houses. This house was not painted, had broken windows and creaky porch steps. She got a shiver down her spine but slowy approached the scratched up wooden door. She put her hand in a fist and let out a loud knock. The door slowly creaked open. A tall man at about 40 years old stood in the doorway. He had a slightly gray beard and eyes so brown they looked black. While the man looked at her she said "hello sir im your new neighbor". He replied "hi my name is Daniel would you like to come in for a drink? You look exhausted". "Yes please" She said very thirsty from doing her tour around the neighborhood. Daniel welcomed her inside and poured them both a glass of sweet lemonde. Little did Jane know he put a knockout pill into her cup of lemonade. She chugged the entire glass not knowing what he had done. Daniel let off a devilish grin as Janes eyes rolled into the back of her head and she fell limp in her chair. Daniel picked her up and brought her down to the basement and strapped her arms and legs to the chair using leather belts. When Jane awoke she was dizzy and her vision was blurry. As her vision cleared she realized she could not move. She pulled and yanked but got nowhere. Her heart jumped into her throat. She tried to scream but her mouth was taped shut. She had never been so scared. She looked around, there were many tools disayed along tables and on the walls. The lights flickered and then Daniel appeared. He ripped the tape off her mouth and took out a sewing kit from his jacket pocket. he gnarled "now you will never be heard" as he took out a large sharp needle and a long black piece of string. She jolted as a tidal wave of pain flowed throughout her upper and bottom lip. She felt hopeless and scared. Her mother wondered where Jane had been since it had been long past an hour yet no word from her. Daniel stopped and grinned at her. the pain she was feeling was extrordinary. He dropped the needle on the ground
and filled up a big bucket of water. He brought it over and put it flat on her lap . He grabbed the back of her head with his meaty, sweaty hands and smashed her head into the water. She tried to breath but all that went into her lungs was water. He yanked her head back up and then forced it down again. She had no air in her lungs. Finally after what seemed like forever he pulled her head back out of the water. She could breath again. He took the bucket of water away and wiped off her face. He walked over to the tool bench with a variety of tools. He looked around at the bench and selected a rusty pair of pliers. Right as he walked towards her pliers in hand there was a loud knock at the door. She was flooded with relief. He walked up the rickety stairs and she knew she had little time. She didnt know that it was her mother at the door looking to find her. Luckily there was a a buzz saw on one of the tool benches. She tried to slide her foot throught the leather strap and she could because of the bucket of water with all the splashing it made her ankle wet. She pulled the table closer with her foot and rubbed the leather strap against the saw blade, it snapped. She undid her other arm and both legs. She grabbed the sewing needle off the ground and tightly squeezed it into her palm. She ran to the doorway and stood beside it waiting for Daniel. She heard him shut the door and make his way down the hallway towards the stairs. As soon as he went through the doorway she stabbed him in the stomach. A red spot quickly formed where he had been wounded. She ran up the stairs as quick as she could but he grabbed her ankle and she fell flat on her face. Buckets of warm, red blood streamed down her face. He started to tug and pull her down but she stomped on his head multiple times until his groop loosened. She scampered up the stairs and out the door. She caught up with her mom and her mom screamed in shock. She took her to the hospital straight away to get her mouth unsewn. After Jane told her everything. They ended up moving back to there home town.
Anything can happen to anyone.

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⏰ Last updated: Aug 30, 2015 ⏰

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