Non-art book

Rewrite #1 - NTB Prologue

Btw don't question the cover I just pulled something from my camera roll

What I changed:
-It is now more to the storyline

Original:

Day 1

The name's Socks. 541-69, Xero. It's my first day on the journey to find intelligent life, and I have had no luck so far. Figures. I don't know what I was expecting when I first thought of leaving my home planet. I guess just to show those people who outlawed my kind that we can be good, and not like that zaitornen, Vizor, who thought trying to take control of Xero's residents was a good idea. He scarred the Nephalems' reputation, and now I think I might be the last one on my planet. Well, not on my planet, but who cares.

Day 25

Some promising signs! My radar found a galaxy with multiple planets, and one has the balance needed for life! It might be a long shot, for it is around 800 light years away, but I bet I could do it! I'll just need to get my light speed engine tools at the ready.

Day 69

Well this is just great. And maybe my last entry.

I ran out of fuel and I am now being slowly sucked into a black hole. GREAT.

We learned how to avoid these situations in training, but no one has gone this far from Chronic ever before, and you would usually have fuel at these times... Those crindnis should have thought about that during training.

Well, I guess **the rest of the page is covered with a mix of blood and black goo**

New:

Entry #1, Day 1

My name is (scribbles) Socks. I'm from the planet Xero, in the Chronic galaxy. I've left on a mission to find intelligent life beyond our universe. We're lucky this mission was able to go on, with the war and all, and I'm lucky I was able to even go. Nephalems aren't really a species that people trust anymore, ever since Vizor started the war.

Which is just stupid. I mean, we may have split bloodlines, but that's no different than literally any other hybrid.

Anyway, I'll update this every day if I can. Usually if something significant happens. Which I'm not expecting anything crazy, but you never know in space.

[End of Entry]

Entry #7, Day 7

I've picked up something on the radar! There's another planet system, about 800 or so light years away from here. I've dubbed it "Half System," since half the planets are solid and half are gas. One of them, the third from the central star, has the balance needed to sustain life. What kind of life, I have no clue.

But it's worth a shot.

[End of Entry]

Entry #69, Day 69 (yes I kept that)

This may be my last entry.

In attempting to enter Half's galaxy, I've run out of fuel. And I've come across a very, very large black hole that is slowly sucking me into my death.

Just zait.

Yeah, we went over this kind of stuff in training. But no one ever goes out this far from Xero, especially without the fuel for it. Which I should have check that before I did this, but I didn't. Oh well.

The pressure. I'm getting a headache from it now. I need to get out of this.

But yet I can't.

(There is more writing, however it is covered in a mixture of blood and some kind of black, goopy substance.)

[End of Entry]

I'll figure out how I'm gonna put this in there, but for now take it