Hi I'm the Narrator 999 of the story, I will just react to what i read(I'm the brother author btw)
(Important stuff: The story start at Philippines, the story start while there's covid-19, i upload weekly,most of school is having a online class instead of going to school
how scores work in philippines : there's no A+ or even B- it just 10/20 something like that,
to be top scores in the classroom you need 90+ average score(total score), if you got 75 or less you fail and repeat school year, our character live in tondo manila, there not rich, he's family live in the same room, pesos is more cheap than dollar 50 pesos i think is equal 1 dollar)
Story starts:
Our character is currently is sleeping on a room
Hikaru: Zzzzz...zzZ.zzz...ZZzz
Natsumi open her room with her have a broom on her hand and realize hikaru is still sleeping
Natsumi: That hikaru still not awake? how many times i have to say to him wake up early and then clean the house(says with a completely angry expression)
Natsumi knocked the door and the sound is so loud it wakes hikaru
hikaru: Huh? aunt?(says by hikaru quietly)
hikaru realize he oversleep
hikaru: Ummm, what aunt?( with him knowing what she will says)
Natsumi: aren't you supposed to be cleaning right now? why are you still sleeping? it's literally 9:00 AM already? aren't the rules of this house your supposed to be awake at 8:00 AM then it breakfast then clean? and currently you just literally just wake up, right now why don't you start cleaning already?(says with completely anger)
Natsumi: your parents is literally just paying 5,000 Pesos( Says with more quietly)
Narrator 999: is she bragging cause it actually a good roast Lol
Natsumi leaves then start cleaning on her room with a broom and hikaru emotions suddenly become completely anger
hikaru: what a shitty old hug it sounded like she is bragging because my father and mother are poor and she has many money, then why don't she just leave my grandma's house and go to her condo or something instead of staying on this house? is it because she can treat us a maid?
hikaru started cleaning on the room but then natsumi ask why is he there cleaning
natsumi: are you cleaning there
hikaru: yes?
natsumi: why are you using light? didn't the rules of this house don't spend to much electricity?
hikaru: this is just a rechargeable flashlight?
natsumi: when you charge it doesn't it use electricity? go clean on the balcony instead on this room so you don't have to use rechargeable flashlight?
hikaru goes to the balcony and saw kiyomi the son of his aunt Natsumi Kanda, kiyomi is just 4 years old and hikaru just turned 12
kiyori- hello hikaru.... Good morning
hikaru ignores it then start cleaning
hikaru: why do i have to clean a place that I already cleaned yesterday and not dirty place? her logic doesn't make sense? I wish i could escape this hell... god dammit(expressed with sadness and anger)
then hikara realise something
hikaru: hold on, I could actually and it benefit me a lot(says with a smile)
Hikaru's Dark InSide awaken?
hikaru thoughts: if escape then go to my father then started crying we will go back to my Aunt Yuuna then the network signal there says by my father is weak so I could that can be useful on many ways and then i don't need to clean or anything, probably but dishes will be my task there so i could still help they are kind and I lived there on the past so we already have bonds?
hikaru: I probably start packing important stuff but i need only a few so it doesn't look that I planned everything...okay, then I probably start now so I don't waste time?
Hikaru open the door then go inside and met kiyori at the door
Narrator 999: does kiyori heard things? and also cleaning is not that bad if you don't have to clean everyday and doesn't have to clean, clean spot? doesn't it? god damn I hate his aunt lol? damn some rich people really likes to bragged sometimes? is the house that big? I wish the smile can be more menacing? It is just me that excited for part 2?
YOU ARE READING
Dark InSide
Mystery / ThrillerIt's just ordinary life of a smart person or is it really a normal school life? this person is kind or not? is he hardworker or not? what is he? what he's real goal? we'll he ever reach it, is he trustable? is he just an ordinary person? is he dumb...