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This was going to be the cover art but I realized it was to wide to fit into the cover frame comfortably, and I hated how the shading turned out, so I changed to to a zoom in on the boat planks which I liked more,
Mint choco was going to be chapter twos victim,
after I changed that I was considering making art of lattes death but I decided it too graphic for some younger readers, (all the scrapped art will be put in my art book at a later date)
Sorbet was originally not even going to be in the story, the original title was "all aboard" but I changed that after making the main villan sorbet shark cookie, the message above the title. Is a little tribute to that
The original villan was going to be mango but I changed him out for sorbet as I felt they fit better with the stories theming, don't worry you'll get murder mango eventually
During the pre writing of chapter 1 and 2 I actually had sorbet speak English, but that didn't feel right to me so I tried translations aswell but eventually I decided on raw OooO's so what they're saying is left to the imagination
Dozer,cherry ball,rougefort, timekeeper, mocha ray, and gingerbright were all going to make cameos in the story but I decided to move dozer and timekeeper to a future chapter and scrap the rest of them
