The Whisper In The Wind (Edmund and Peter Pevensie)

I cant see Aslan

Evelyn p.o.v

We pulled up on the bank of the land. I was the last one to get off the boat. I pulled up my dress which BTW was super uncomfortable. I started to get off but I saw a hand reach to my direction. My eyes ran up the arm to see Peter's face. I smiled and took it. He helped me out. "Thanks peter". I said and started walking again.

"hello there, its OK I'm Lucy what's your name" I heard Lucy with her cute British accent, we all looked her way and she was walking towards a dark brown grizzly bear. Oh no. "Lucy no get back" Hope yelled holding her bow and arrows. The bear turned around and stood up on his hind legs. Again oh no. The bear started chasing her. "Lucy" I yelled as Susan lifted her bow to shoot. She wouldn't. "Susan shoot it" peter yelled. Edmund and peter took out there heavy swords and started running towards the bear.

Finally an arrow went through the bears heart and it fell heavy on the ground. Lucy ran to peter and hugged him. We all looked at Susan but her arrow was still in her hand. We then looked at Hope. She shot the bear down. She saved Lucy's life. "Thank you" Lucy said hugging into her brother. Trumpkin on the other hand walked towards the bear and took out a big knife. "What are you doing?" Edmund asked.
"You might not see Narnia as such a magical place anymore, when your treated like an animal for so long you turn to one." Trumpkin said sticking the knife into the bears belly and slicing it open. I turned away because I didn't want to see a horrible sight.

We walked into the woods, it was all silent as we didn't want to speak. Susan finally broke the silence "I don't remember going this way" she laughed. "Well that's the thing about girls, they can't store any direction in their head" I giggled. "That's because we have something in our head" I said and I cpukld see the smile form on his face from the back of his head. We walked by big stones and he stopped. "I'm not lost" trumpkin brushed by my skirt. "No, you just going the wrong way" they started arguing. Finally there walked again and we came across a big cliff.

I dazed off until I heard peter telling Susan to shut up. She sighed and I looked around and couldn't see Hope. "Hey guys were is Hope?" I asked and everybody's head snapped my way. "I'm here" I heard her voice and I saw her emerging from the forest. "What were you doing Hope I was starting to get worried" I said and she smiled. "I saw a flower back there and it was pretty so I ran back and got it. She lifted the flower and it was pink that got darker red in the centre, it had loads of designs. It surely was beautiful. I smiled.

"Aslan, look its Aslan" Lucy's questioned voice grabbed our attention. We looked to her. "Where?" Edmund asked. She looked back at us and pointed back to nothing she looked back. "He was right there, I'm not crazy" she turned fully and looked at us. "I'm sure there is lots of mountain lions around here Lucy" Peter said sighing. "I know Aslan when I see him" she said her voice raised a little louder. "Last time I didn't believe Lucy, I ended up looking pretty stupid" Edmund announced showing some sympathy. "I'm sorry Lu" I said and followed Peter away.

Hope p.o.v

I stayed back with Edmund and Lucy. She started walking and past us both. Edmund let me infront of him and I started walking.

We were heading to the telmerines. To see what they are doing. To be honest I was sort of scared to go back to them, me and Evelyn spent months trying to get away from them and now there trying to bring us back. Yep I'm terrified.

We finally heard weapons hitting other weapons and chatting. I was ahead of the group, and I was far ahead on my own. I got on my knees behind a tree and peeked out. I saw the telmerines building something. I got up and ran a bit closer. I think there building a bridge. Why?. I heard a crack of grass behind me. I snapped my head and saw Edmund walking down. I knew he was gonna say something so I jumped up and cupped his mouth. "Sshhh" I let go and his eyes grew in concern. Everyone started appearing and we told them to be quite. Me and Evelyn started walking until we came to a pile of damp wood logs. We peeked above them. Thousands of men were working on a bridge.

We heard horses trotting from our left and we all looked over. "Miraz" I shouted and whispered at the same time. We all ducked behind the logs. "I'm not sure this was a great plan Peter" Susan said angry. I nodded and I ran back into the woods again and they all followed.