«forgiven or not forgiven»

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Tommy's pov:
I was walking towards my older brothers house. He lives in a snow biome. It's really cold for me, since I'm more used to the nether and in the over world. Although I'm slowly getting used to this type of cold temperature, since I'm always visiting my father here. After almost half an hour of walking to his house, I finally made it there. I knocked on his door to check and see if he's home or not. It seems like he didn't answer, maybe he was out getting some wood. I saw him walking towards the house I got a little scared of him cause he seemed a little annoyed or angry.

Techno's Pov:
I saw my little brother Tommy infront of my house. When I saw him I had the feeling I should kill him. I approached him and I asked him "What are you doing here Tommy?." He seemed quiet for a moment I'm not sure why though.
"Will you answer me or are you just going to stand there, and say nothing?."
I finally realized that he was shaking. He looked cold. I heard there will be a storm today. I guess I'll let him stay with me for a day. But only a day. "Okay look, you're going to stay at my place only for a day, but there will be some rules alright?. Rule one: Don't touch anything that isn't yours. Rule two: Don't go anywhere you aren't allowed. Rule three: Do not go downstairs. Rule four: When I tell you to shut up, you won't be able to say anything till I give you permission to talk, alright?. Did you understand?." He shook his head. I guess he understood, what I meant. It's actually weird that he didn't say anything against the rules. It is feels new or more... odd, he seemed like he wanted to say something but he didn't as if someone stopped him from trying to tell me something or say something to me.

Tommy's Pov:
I went inside the house. Even though I was a little scared that something might happen to me, I still did,,, I didn't want to make Techno more mad at me, I know he's my brother but...- I don't like what I've done to him... Betraying him wasn't really the best or the greatest idea....
I should've never done that, but... I was just trying to protect myself and the country... I know we lost, and that is my fault.....- I really messed up, but this is all my fault... I should've never betrayed him... I bet he doesn't even forgive...-
*Tommy had some tears in his eyes*
I-I... I wonder what would've happened if I never even betrayed him... W-would we have all been a happy family again...? Would he be more happy if I'd be dead...? Would he have been more happy if I would've never betrayed him...? What if I just...- kill myself...? H-he said he'd kill me if I'd get near his property again...
What if I just tell him to do it now...? What's the point in living if everyone wants me dead...? Does anyone still care about me...? Do they all see me as their enemy now.....?-
Can't I just...- *he took out a knife and started at it* do it right now....?

Techno's Pov:
I went inside my house behind Tommy. He was mumbling something's and I could barely hear it-... What is he even saying?- And why'd he stop in the middle of the room?- Is he-
WHAT THE?! WHY'S HE HOLDING A KNIFE?! Is he trying to kill me?
Pfft- he won't even be able to- sh¡t.., *he stopped Tommy from killing himself* "Tomm what the hell do you think you're doing?!" He answered me kind of stuttering a bit, he did seem like he was sorry about what he did to me but,... I can't just forgive him for that, he literally betrayed me, this was all his fault. Although now I have to deal with this raccoon again. Wait uhm- why'd he even turn around at me?- Does he want to say something?,,, He does look like he wants to say something but I'm not sure what-... Maybe I should just ask him- "Tommy, spit it out. What do you even want to tell?." I asked him but he didn't seem to be answering me,.. did I ask or say something wrong to him now?. No, that can't be right, I couldn't have said anything wrong to him, I'm always right. I know it, but,.... why am I even thinking that?-... I can't be worried about him, right?. I mean c'mon, he betrayed me!. I can't just forgive him just now!. Ugh, what am I even doing?! He's my brother!. I can't just stay mad at him. I've let my anger take control of myself so,.. I guess I could forgive him. "Uhm...- hey Tommy?- look,... It's alright, everything's alright now, big brother is here, no need to be scared okay?-,..... You can trust and look,... You don't have to blame yourself for everything anymore, I forgive you and plus, you're just a kid. So it's alright to make mistakes." I can't believe I've even said that. God what am I even doing???? Ugh, just ignore this whole thing happened. It can't be that bad and wouldn't be able to affect me, right?. Yup, right, it won't affect me anyways.

Tommy's Pov:
I got stopped by Technoblade but then I looked at him and I felt like,... I wanted to apologize to him for everything I did... But then he asked me something,... I didn't feel like answering him,.. I just felt really bad if I'd started talking to him without knowing if I'd be allowed to talk to him-... But then all of a sudden he told me something,... He,.. forgives me?-... But....- after everything I've done..- he actually,.. forgives me...?- Why do I,... feel safe around him again...- no, I've got to ignore this feeling, he doesn't truly forgive me, I'm sure about that!-... Actually, nevermind! I-If he would truly forgive me then..., I-I-I'll forgive him too!- "Techno..?- I uhm-... forgive you too for destroying L'Manburg and uhm-... For hurting Tubbo...- so uhhh- I-I-I'll forgive you too, a-and I'll accept your forgiveness too!- You're my big brother after all...-" he seemed uhm...- shocked after I told him that...- did I say something wrong..?! "T-Techno I'm sorry...!- I-I didn't mean to say anything wrong to you!-..." I hugged him tight, I felt safe again and I still felt bad and guilty for everything I did,.. b-but he forgives me!- S-so I don't have to feel like that anymore!-.. Right..?-

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Characters used in this chapter: Technoblade and TommyInnit.

What I hate say about this story/fanfic: this is probably not original or not original, I'm not sure so I'll have to check afterwards if someone already wrote something like this-

My question for you all that read my second story/fanfic: Shall I make a second chapter?

Second question and the answer for it: Will I be doing a QnA? The answer is, yes, maybe I'll be doing one after a couple of chapters later. I'll be telling you guys when I'll be doing one in one of the next chapters.

Words for the story/fanfic and for what I've said just now: 1250

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