A Remake

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I've been Thinking about this for a Long Time Now

And I've Finally Made My Decision

This Book will be Discontinued

But that doesn't Mean the Story is Over

Infact, I'll be Remaking this Book!

Why am I Remaking this Book?

First of All, I Barely Update on this Book AnyMore

In Other Word's, I've Lost Motivation

Second, this Book just Make's me Cringe- 🤢

I Mean, the Whole Story is Being Rushed and Not a Lot of Character Development!

Alongside the Fact that there's Not a Lot of Character BackStory or the BackStory is just to Bland-

Now that I Look Back on this Book, it Make's me Cringe- 🤢

Third, the Way I Wrote this Book was so Bad-

Even though I'm Happy that People Enjoyed this Book, I'm Not Happy with how the Book Turned Out

Now, what will be Different in the Remake?

1. The Reasoning as to why the FriendShip Between Pure Vanilla and the Other Ancient's is Destroyed

Let's be Honest, it was Stupid-

I Feel Like I could've Done Something a Lot Different on that Part

Maybe it should be Pure Vanilla Doing Something Wrong on Accident and Causes the Ancient's to Get Mad at him?

Or Maybe the Ancient's Hurt Pure Vanilla and it's Destroy's their FriendShip with One Another?

To be Honest, I could do Better on that Part-

2. Why Custard Want's to Leave the Vanillan Kingdom

Once Again, I could've Make a Better Reason as to why Custard Want's to Leave the Kingdom

As to what I Might do with this Part, I can't Say

3. How Custard Manage's to Leave the Vanillan Kingdom

Like before, this Part could've Played Out Differently and a Lot Better-

It's CringeWorthy-

4. How the StoryLine Play's Out after Custard Leave's the Vanillan Kingdom

Could've Done Better and it could've Played Out Better

5. How Long the Chapter's should be

I Want the Chapter's to be Longer than They were in this Book-

Why?

Well, the Book would be More Longer than it Currently is-

Not Only that, I could Give you Reader's a Lot More BackStory alongside More to Look Foward to and Use this Chance to have More Character Development along with Side Stories-

Side Stories would be Like the Side Quest's in a Game-

6. The Character's RelationShip's with One Another

Technically, Each Character will have Different Opinion's on how They Feel about SomeOne

Unlike in the Original where I Never Put Anything that could Really Say how a Character Feel's about Another Character-

There are Some Other Thing's that I Want to Put but I'll Wait until Another Time

Also, about the Reincarnating into Cookie Run Kingdom-

These are the Character's that have been Asked to be Reincarnated as or ReQuested to be Reincarnated as

1. Pure Vanilla ( 5 Vote's )

2. Affogato ( 4 Vote's )

3. Custard Cookie III ( 2 Vote's )

4. A Witch's Child ( 1 Vote )

5. White Lily ( 1 Vote )

6. Sea Fairy or MoonLight Cookie ( 1 Vote )

Like before, you can Choose who you Want to Reincarnated as

Or you can ReQuest a Reincarnation if you Want!

Yeah, that's All I have to Say-

Well, See you in the Remake!

Sayonara!

( 536 Word's )

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