The Summer I Will Never Forget

Hi guys this is the first time I've made a story on here so if so I would appreciate it if you could comment what I could fix or to make my story a little better I also like it when an author can let the readers be in the story so comment what you this will happen next ill look through them and if I find one I might put you in the story and take your idea ;)

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Prologue:

"What does he want now?!?!" I wondered walking across my room. I grabbed my phone. Louis...again.

"He just can't wait to see his beautiful cousin" my brother Kyle said popping his head in the door.

"Go talk on your own phone," I said shoving him out the door. I went back to looking at my phone.

Louis: can't wait to see my AWESOME cousin again XD see you in 20 ;)

I was packing my bags to hang out with the boys . . . . . ALL SUMMER LONG!!!!! This was going to be a handful. How was I going to deal with them?

"Lol c u later Lou:D " I texted Louis back. As I rummaged through all my stuff, I made sure I had absolutely positively everything a girl could need, want or have. I looked Around my teal room. I wasn't going to see it for a long time. I picked up my bags and turned off the lights. I shut the door and ran downstairs.

"What are you in a hurry for?" My dad said as I entered HIS kitchen.

" why wouldn't she be" my mom replied clucking to herself. I just came down and they were already teasing me. As I was eating my flapjacks (a.k.a. Pancakes) I saw Louis cat pull into the drive way! I dropped my fork and ran outside to see him.

"LOUIS!!!" I yelled! I ran towards him.

"JULIE" he screeched giving me the most tightest bear hug ever! We went inside so I could get all my stuff. As u was picking up my bags my dad had to give his speech on what not to do when I was gone.

"Dad, dad ill be fine." I said as Louis wrapped his arm around my waist.

"You know the drill," my dad said looking at Louis.

"Yes sir!!" He said while giving the army solute. I said my last goodbyes to my mom, dad, and surprisingly my brother. Man he is going to be one spoiled kid when I get back. Louis and I put my bags into the back and we drove off.

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You like??? I know it's only the prologue but just to let you know Julie is Louis cousin if I didn't make myself clear enough. Please vote and comment . Remember comment what you think will happen next and ill either dedicate the chapter to you or put you in the story;)!!!! Also comment what I could do to make my story better. It would help me a lot THANKS GUYS!!!!!