Harry Potter Preferences!

1. How you met part 2

Ron:
I stepped on the train with my twin brother Harry by my side, it was my first day at Hogwarts while it was Harry's first day of third year. Before going to Hogwarts , I went to a different witch and wizard school of magic, as we stepped on the train a girl with bushy hair came up to us and hugged Harry "good to see you Harry"she said "it's good to see you too" Harry said, i nudged Harry to let him know that I was still beside him. He looked down at me and introduced me. "Hermione, this is my twin sister (Y/N), she attended a different school before Hogwarts" he explained " nice to Meet you hermione" I said while shaking her hand "look Ron's over there" Harry pointed out and began walking to a red head boy holding a rat. Harry and Ron said their hellos. Ron looked over Harry's shoulder and saw me "Harry, who's is" Ron said while nodding at me "this is my twin sister, (Y/N), it's her first day at Hogwarts, " hi" I said shyly while holding my hand out for him to shake," hey" he replied while shaking my hand

~ so how was this one yay or naah