"Hook Man"

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In a college dorm room.

"Don't do anything I wouldn't do." says Taylor. "There's nothing you wouldn't do." says Lori while leaving. Taylor smiles to herself. "That's true." Lori's boyfriend's car pulls up. Standig behind the trees, there is a tall figure with a hook. "I thought we were going to the party." says Lori. "Well, we can't arrive on time." says Rich.

"You know, if I didn't know any better , I'd think you brought me here on purpose." says Lori while sitting gunshot in Rich's car. "What? I'm offended." says Rich feigning shock. "Yeah, I'm sure." says Lori sarcastically. They smile and begin to kiss. Lori's cell phone rings and they reluctantly break away. The caller ID says 'Dad Calling." "You wanna get that?" says Rich.

"Definitely not." She shuts the ringer off. They resume kissing, and Rich put his hand under Lori's halter strap. She pulls away and moves his hand. "No."

"It's ok." Lori looks uncomfortable. Outside, the figure with the hook is moving slowly out from the trees. Back inside the car, Rich begins kissing Lori's neck and puts his hand back under her strap. She looks even more uncomfortable and pulls away.

"Hey, I mean it." They hear a loud screeching noise. Outside, the man is dragging his hook along a Dead End sign. Lori is looking around. "What was that?" "I don't know." They hear the same sound. The man is shown dragging his hook along a sign that says 9 Mile Road.

 "What is that?" asks Rich. He opens the car door. "No! Rich, no!" "No, just wait here." He gets out of the car and shuts the door. Lori looks terrified. Outside, Rich is looking around when he hears more screeching. He turns to see a long scratch being made on the side of his car, but the Hook Man is invisible. "What the hell?"

"Rich, let's go!"The back tire gets punctured. She screams."Rich?" She looks around, but Rick is not outside. "Rich!" She rolls up the windows and locks them. "Rich, where are you?" She suddenly hears scratching and banging on the roof. She screams and jumps into the backseat on the floor. The noise stops. Lori is breathing heavily. "Ok ok." She gets out of the car and starts to run away when she turns around and sees Rich. He is suspended from a tree, upside down, above the car. Lori screams.

Outdoor café

Sam is on a payphone. "Alright, thank you for your time." He hangs up and walks back to the table. Dean is with Emma working at the laptop. "You, uh, half-caf, double vanilla latte is gettin' cold over here, Francis." says Dean. Emma laughs.

 Emma laughs

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"Bite me." Sam sits down. "So, anthing?" Sam shakes his head. "I had 'em check the FBI's Missing Persons Data Bank. No John Doe's fitting Dad's description. I even ran his plate for traffic violations." "Sam, I'm telling' ya, I don't think Dad wants to be found." Sam looks disappointed. "Check this out." says Emma. She show Sam an article on the computer about Rich's death. "It's a news item out of Planes Courier. Ankeny, Iowa. It's only about a hundred miles from here."

Sam is reading. "The mutilated body was found near the victim's car, parked on 9 Mile Road." "Keep reading." says Dean.  "Authorities are unable to provide a realistic description of the killer. The sole eyewitness, whose name has been withheld, is quoted as saying the attacker was invisible." "Could be something interesting." "Or it could be nothing at all. One freaked out witness who didn't see anything? Doesn't mean it's the Invisible Man." "But what if it is? Dad would check it out."

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