Avneil Proposal

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Ayesha - good morning didi, ab tera pair kaisa hai.
Avni - hn abhi thik hai.
Neela - beta pair kaisa hai ab.
Avni - hn ma thik hai.
Ashish - hoye pair kaisa hai ab
Avni - hn thik hai.
Neela - main aj nahi jaungi college, avni ko dhyan rakhungi..
Ayesha - toh Phir main bhi nahi jaungi school, agar didi ko kuch chahiye, main hu na.
Avni and Neela - tum school jaogi.
Ayesha - yar tu didi rok le na, nahi jana hai waha.
Ashish - chalo chalo.
In DUTTA house
Neil - mujhse use bat karle leni chahiye, nahi nahi chodo aj exam hai.
Avni - Kitna ghamandi hai ek bar bhi puchta nahi ki mai kaise hu yah.
Like this one week goes and avni gets well and Neil's exams is also over.
Avni goes to college
Avni - hi vidya
Vidya hugs avni - shukar hai tu thik haogai hai.
Avni - neil.
Vidya - ofo yar, tu ate na ate usek bare Mein kyu puch rahi hai.
Avni - nahi puchu.
Vidya - dekh dekh yash agaya. Aj ja aur tu sab kehe de use.
Avni - hn. Aj karlungi
Yash - hi tum mujhse itna ignore kyu kar rahi ho, itne dino se.
Avni - listen yash, us din jo kuch bhi hua tha, maine bas guesses hi kaha tha. I don't have any feelings for you and I'm sorry hum logo ne tum se madat le hai. Mujhse Sirf neil se hi pyar hai. Tumse kabhi bhi attachment hi nahi hui meri. I'm sorry aur Yeh galat fehmi ko dur kar lo. Ki mai tumse pyar karti hu aur kuch bhi feeling tumhare liye rakhti hu.
Yahs - mai samajhta hu, maine sach apne man se tumhe propose kiya tha. I really love you. Pehele din se hi,jis din tumhe dekha tha maine. I was actually trying to become to close to you but woh ho nahi paya.
Avni - mujhe laga tha Yeh plan mein tha, mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum sach Mein kar rahe ho. I'm sorry.
Yahs - koi bat nahi.
Meanwhile neil ka exam khatam hogaya hai
Juhi - hi neil.
Neil - hi juhi.
Juhi - hum log ek bar aur Phir se ek bar. I mean you cna understand.
Yash was there as an invigilator in the exam hall and got to see juhi and neil up there.
Neil - dekho maine kabhi bhi tumse pyar hi nahi kiya hai and I'm sorry hum Phir se nahi ho sakte ek sath.
Aur mujhe chod do.
And neil goes from there.
Juhi - agar tum mere nahi hue na, mai kiski bhi nahi hone dungi tumhe.
Yahs hears this and come there.
Yahs - tumhara neil ke sath kuch chal raha hai kya.
Juhi - oo shut up, mind your own business.
Yahs - apna business hi toh mind kar raha hu.
Juhi - what do you mean.
Yash - mujhe pata hai neil kis se pyar karta hai aur woh tumhare sath ese kyu behave kar raha hai.
Juhi - woh kaun hai.
Yahs - jise Mein Chahata hu, woh neil ko chahti hai.
Juhi - aur woh kaun hai. Bolo na
Yahs - magar tumhe meri madat akrni hogi, agar tumhe neil chahiye toh.
Juhi - hn main karungi, mujhe neil chahiye aur tumhe woh.
Yahs - uska nam hai avni.
Juhi - woh avni. Toh Phir thik hai inki love story shuru hone se hi Pehle khatam karni hai.
Yahs - toh Phir thik hai main jata hu, aj cafeteria ke pass milte hein.
Juhi - ok, by the way tumhara nam kya hai.
Yash - mera nam yash. Aur tumhara
Juhi - mera nam juhi. Ok bye.
Avni is in her class
And neil pass through the class.
Vidya - Abe oye dekh kaun ja raha hai.
Avni - Arey Yeh toh neil hai.
Vidya - aj propose kar de.
Avni - hn dekh ta hu.
Rohan - hoye kya kar rahe ho, aj humare yaha per farewell hai. Aj college bohot hi bada function hone wala hai.
Avni - hn, vidya tune bataya nahi.
Vidya - Arey yar mei toh bhul gai thi. Aj sachi time dkeh kar propose Mar de.
Rohan - kisko kya karna hai propose. And vidya says everything to rohan
Rohan - OK koi bat nahi, Mein Meri dost kar madat karunga.
Meanwhile
Neil - hoye aj toh function ahi humara
Ajay - hn, aj tu ruk ja.
Neil - hn hn.
Avni comes near neil and neil ignores her. And she goes after him, Arey yar tum kitna Nakhra karte ho yar. Ko bhi ladka ese nahi karti hai jese Yeh kar raha hai. For her legs she can't walk much and sits there.
While the function is going on
Avni calls Neela - ma mujhe ghar ane mei der hojaega, ap log kahana kha lena.
Neela - Phir bhi kitna der lagega
Avni - ma mujhd kuch sunai nahi de raha hai main bad Mein bat karungi.
Yash and juhi in cafeteria.
Yash - kya kare hum.
Juhi - Pehele hume neil ko misguide karna hai.
Yash - woh kaise kare hum.
Juhi tells the plan.
Meanwhile 
Vidya - aye sun avni, aj bol de, use na gallery ke taraf bulakar bol de.
Avni - hn thik hai,
They were talking sitting in the cafeteria and yash got to hear this.
Vidya - aye sun tera kam hai neil ko bulana, thik hai. Gallery ke aspas thik hai.
Rohan - ok boss.
Avni is waiting in the gallery - Arey yar Yeh neil kab ayega yaha par.
Yahs - avni.
Avni - tum yaha kya kar rahe ho.
Yahs - nhai mujhse tumse kuch bat karna hai.
Avni - kya bat karna hai.
Meanwhile
Rohan - yar neil, tum thoda gallery mei jaoge, mujhse tumse kuch bat karni hai, tum pehel jao mei ata hu waha.
Neil - kya bat karna hia tumhe waha. Jo tum yaha nahi kar sakte.
Rohan - Arey yar tum jao toh.
Neil - Acha thik hai.
In gallery
Avni - kya hai bolo.
Yash - tum mujhe ek aur bar mujhe chance nahi de sakti ho, please yar. I beg you and kneels down.
Avni - Arey Yeh kya kar rahe ho tum utho, dekho maine tumhe kaha hai na mai neil se hi pyar karti hu. Tum mere ache dost hi raho ge humesha
And that time neil comes there
Yash in no time pulls avni near him
Avni - Yeh kya kar rahe ho.
Yash in no time kisses her hard on her lips and for 5 sec avni didn't realise what happened and neil sees everything.
Avni pushes him and neil sees everything and his heart breaks there.
Avni sees neil and goes near him - and shouts neil neil suno please.
Neil - kya tum mujhe Yeh dikhne ke liye layi thi yaha, and shouts hn bolo avni.
Avni - please suno, please suno.
Neil goes form there.
Avni comes near yash and give him a tight slap.
Avni - agali bar mere pass aye na. Mein tumhe chodungi nahi.
Yash - *in his mind, ab neil ka trust toh gaya. Mera kam toh hogaya.
Avni comes near vidya and says everything.
Vidya - mujhe jakar Yeh sab neil se kehna chahiye.
Avni - nahi nahi please woh samjhe ga nahi, yar please kuch mat bolna. And goes from there.
Vidya goes near neil and calls neil.
Neil - kya hai, aur tum yaha kyu ayi ho, avni ki chamcha giri karne ka.
Vidya - oh hello, main na kiski ki chami nahi ho. Thik hai, aur tumne jo sab dekha sab galat tha.
Neil - ooo wow, toh tum avni ki safai dene ayi ho.
Vidya - hn aur tum sunoge.
Neil - mujhe kuch nahi suna.
Vidya - dekho neil ek bar sunlo, avni tumse pyar karti hai, aur woh uska ishar karne ke liye use tumhe waha bulaya tha, magar kaha se yahs agaya. Mujhse bhi pata nahi
Neil - magar yahs toh uska boyfriend hai na
Vidya - nahi hai, avni ne Sirf use accept kiya tha guse Mein. Aur usne yahs ko istemaal kiya tumhare pass ane ke liye. Cause she loves you. Aur tum use esa karoge aur hum dono uss din ke liye bohot hi guilty mehesus kar rahe hein. I'm sorry again.
Neil - koi bat nahi, itna kuch hogaya aur mujhe abhi pata chal raha hai.
Vidya - neil kya tum bhi use pyar karti ho tum abhi boldo, kyuki main nahi chahti meri dost ka mna dukhe.
Neil - hn main bhi use hi pyar karta hu.
Vidya - toh Phir jao aur use apni man ki bat bol do.
Neil - magar woh kaha hai
Vidya - mujhe nahi pata tum dhundo use. Maine use bohot calls ki magar uthaya nahi usene
Neil - toh Phir mujhe pata hai woh kaha hai.
Vidya - toh Phir jao.
Neil remembers she told whenever she wants to sit alone she always goes near the pond and he goes there.
Avni - yar mere hi sath Esa kyu hota hai humesha. And she cries.
Neela calls avni.
Avni - hn ma.
Neela - baccha ghar kab aoogi.
Avni - maine thodi der Mein ajaungi.
Neela - dekho bohot rat agar hoa jayega na, toh papa tumhe pick karne chale ayege, tum akele mat ana beta.
Avni - hn mumma.
Neela - beta tum thik ho.
Avni - hn hn ma, mujhe kya hoga.
And she hungs up the call
and she cries again.
Neil comes there and she stops crying and wipe her tears.
Neil - yar itni rat ko kaun yaha baith ta hai.
Avni - tumhe kya, tum hote kaun ho mujhe Yeh puchne wale.
Neil - Arey arye itna gussa kyu ho rahe ho yar.
Avni - jao na tum yaha se.
Neil - nahi jaunga and he holds her both hands and she is struggling.
Avni - mujhe chodo neil.
Neil - nahi chodunga Mein tumhe.
Avni - jao na, tum yaha se mujhe akela baith ja hai. Yah Phir tum betho mujhe jane do.
Neil - no, I'm never ever letting you go form me.
Avni was shocked and sees his face.
Neil - mujhe sab pata chal gaya hai, ajke bare Mein.
Avni - kya Kya, uske bare Mein.
Neil - hn
Avni - tab toh tumne suna nahi, ab kyu aye ho, ache insan ke nate. Maine kitni bar tumhe bulaya waha magar nahi and at this time Neil pushes her closer to him and connect his lips to her. Avni was startled but after few seconds she also responded and she was in a comfort zone with him but soon she realise and she pushed him.
Neil - I'm sorry, mere iss harkat ke liye, magar mujhe tumhe batana tha ki i love you. Maine tumhe jis din se dekha hai usi hi din se main tumhe pyar karta hu, aur mere dil mein bas tum hi ho. Aur koiii... And she catches his lips and she kissed him. And they kissed them for 4 minutes. And after they break up and hug each other tightly.
Avni - mujhe kabhi bhi chod ke mat jana. I love you Neil.
Neil - I love you and they both were in tears. And neil gives her a kiss on her neck. And they were hugging each other.
And gets a call from sweta.
Avni - neil
Neil-hm bolo
Avni - tumhara phone baj raha hain.
Neil - oh han and they breaks the hug. Hello ma
Sweta - tum ghar kab aoge.
Neil - hn hn mein Aa jaunga. Thodi der bat hi nikal ta hu. Ok bye.
Avni - tumhe ghar chale jana chahiye.
Neil - hn magar tum kaise jaogi.
Avni - mein bus se chali jaungi.
Neil - ruko main chod deta hu.
Avni - nahi main chali jaungi.
Neil - nahi ab Mein tumhara bf hu na, bas aur ki bhi bat nahi.
Avni - neil.
Neil - hn bolo
Avni - dekho humare bare Mein tum pni didi ko kuch mat bolna, ki Mein kisiko nahi kahungi, main nahi chahti hu ki humare bare Mein Koi kuch Jane .
Neil - OK.
And they both were walking with holding hands.
Neil - avni
Avni - hn
Neil- kya hum log Phir se hug kar sakte hein kya.
Avni in no time hugs him and this time tightly.
Neil - mujhe tumhe iss bar kahi nahi chodna hai.
And kisses on her cheeks. And breaks the hug but hlf of her body breaks and she looks on his face and kiss on his lips a small kiss.
And they again walk
Neil - chalo main chod deta hu.
And he drops her home but little far away.
Neil - chalo gahr Aa Gaya tumhara. Bye toh karne ka man nahi hai.
Avni - OK bye and gives him a little kiss on his cheeks. Bye bye neil.
Goes inside the house smilingly.
Neela, ashish and ayesha
Neela - Arey Arey, itna khush. Kya hua hai thoda Hume bhi share karona.
Ashish - beta tum kaise ayi
Avni - woh mujhe ate Waqt neil milaya tha, toh usne mujhe chodyiya, maine mana kiya, uske bad bhi usene kaha ki akeli ladki rat Mein mat jao main chodunga ab chalo. Toh main Aa gayi.
Neela - magar tini khusi kyu. Kahi neil pasand toh nahi Aagaya.
Avni *Arey yar inko kaise pata chal gaya (in her mind)
Nahhhhhiiii wesa kuch nahi hai.
Neela - toh Phir haste haste hue Aa rahi thi.
Avni - hasna kya bura hai, mujhe ek bat yad Aa gayi isiliye has rahi thi.
Ashish - thoda hume bhi toh bolo.
Avni - Arey Iss aishi ki ek bat Yaad Aa gai.
Ayesha - kaunsi bat.
Avni - Arey woh wali, uss din.
Ayesha and avni smiles strangerly.
Ayesha - hn hn yad agaya
Neela - mereko nahi bolegi, mumma hu na mei teri.
Ayesha - Arey yar mumma mera ur didi ka secret hai. Main kyu bolu.
Neela - Acha thik hai.
After finishing there dinner all goes to sleep.
Avni texts to Neil
Avni - hi, so gaye kya and no response.
Ofo Yeh ladka bhi na. So gaya hai shayad.
In other room.
Ayesha is sleeping with her both legs near neela's waist and head on ashish chest.
Neela - Ashish so gaye ho kya.
Ashish - nahi. Kya hua beech rat Mein, tumhari neend khul gai.
Neela - woh main, mujhe na lagta hai avni kuch na kuch toh chupa rahi hai.. Bata nahi rahi hai.
Ashish - Ofo, tum uske bare itna mat socho jab use thik lagega woh bolegi.
Neela gets up and incline on the bed Ashish also gets up and turns the light up. - kya hua.
Neela - Humne use Bachpan se thoda sa strict parenting ki hai isiliye woh kuch bhi kehene se dar rahi hai. Kuch bhi share karne se hickkicha rhai hain. Mujhe kabhi khabar dar lagta hai ki woh Humse dur na chalijaye, main bohot hi buri na hu(Neela starts to cry and ashish keeps her head on his chest) ashish - Arey kuch nahi hai esa, tum toh meri pyari si nili ho aur inlogo ki khubsurat mordern mom. Ab rona band karo.
Ayesha gets up and in sleepy - mumma ap roh kyu rahi hai and hugs her and in sleepy tone ap toh mattt papa... Hai... Na... And sleeps on her
Neela and ashish laughs.
Ashish - koi toh hai neend Mein Bhi tumhara support kanre wala.
And they laugh.
Neela keeps ayesha aside, main na thoda pani pee kar ayi.
Neela goes to avni's room.
Avni is sleeping and she caress her hair.
Avni turns around and gets scared - ahhh...
And Neela puts his hand on her mouth.
Avni - Arey mumma, ap yaha kya hua.
Neela - arye kuch nahi ese hi. Tu ja so ja.
Avni - kuch hua hai kya.
Neela - nahi nahi kuch nahi hai, tu ja so ja. And comes back to there room. And sees ashish and ayesha are hugging each other and sleeping and she also sleeps there.

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