detention?!?; 1/???

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this is based off of the breakfast club (IK THERE ARE ONLY 5 PEOPLE THAT PLAYS THE MAIN ROLES BUT YOU KNOW..it would be nice ) ofc the description of them won't be the same as the cast bc Nathen would never be "the brain" or Scott would never be "the criminal" 💀 (ok maybe Scott would but idk💯)
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Nathan: the class clown
Dylan: the athlete
Scott:the loner
Alisa:the princess
Delilah: the basket case
you: the musician

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Nathen POV:

" Saturday, march 24 /2001 . South Park high school, Colorado South Park 7:27"

"dear mr.Vernon.
we accept the fact that we had to sacrifice a Saturday in detention for whatever it was we did wrong, what we did was wrong But we think you're crazy to make us write this essay telling you who we think we are, what do you care? You see us as you want to see us...in the simplest terms and the most convenient definitions. You see us as a class clown, an athelete, a basket case , a musician, a princess and a loner . Correct? That's the way we saw each other at seven o'clock this morning. We were brainwashed..."

No one's POV:
"I can't believe you can't get me out of this...I mean it's so absurd I have to be here on a Saturday It's not like I'm a defective or anything..." Alisa told her mother .
"I'll make it up to you...Honey ,ditching class to go shopping doesn't make you a defective. Have
a good day." her mother tells her as she rolls her eye at the woman, then Alisa get out of the car and walks into the school.

|cut to Nathen in his car|

"Is this the first time or the last time we do this?!"  Nathen's mom asked him.
"last..." Nathen told her clearly upset
"Well get in there and use the time to your advantage..." his mom told him also upset
"Mom, we're not supposed to study we just have to sit there and do nothing." Nathen tells his mother .
"Well mister you figure out a way to study." his mom telling him off
"Yeahh!!" Nathen's younger and older sisters tell him annoyingly
"well go!" his mom tells him.
then Nathen gets out of the van as it drove off leaving a gust of wind behind him .

|cut to Dylan's car|

"Hey, I screwed around...guys screw around, there's nothing wrong with that. Except you got caught, Sport." Dylan's father tried to show him that is fine that he is going to Detention
"Yeah, Mom already reemed me, alright?" Dylan told his dad
"You wanna miss a match?  You wanna blow your ride?  Now no school's gonna give a scholarship to a discipline case." his father says angry .
Then Dylan gets out of the car then walks inside the school.

|cut to Delilah's car|

A car stops as someone walks in front of the car , then the car honks it's horn . Then Delilah gets out of the car without saying a word to her father or mother, and also her parents don't say a word to her not even a pathetic "bye". As the car race by Delilah looks back at the car and then back at the school then walks in.

|cut to your car|
"well..what did you even do this time..."
as you parent says looking at the tall and big building "why do you care.." you say opening the car door "y/n l/n tell me now!" you parent says in a mad tone , you get off the car not saying a word to them . You swing your guitar over your shoulder  well trying to manage your large purse on your other shoulder, your parent turned on there car an drove off as a big wind left you to struggle with the two bags.

your POV:

| cut to the library |

I walk in with my two things and i see one person in there.ALISA!?!? i didn't really know her in fact we weren't really considered 'friends' but also no strangers. i was just surprised to see such a popular person to be in detention , even more surprised that it was Alisa .l try not make a big deal out of it so i just went to a different seat or else mr.Vernon would separate us so May as well just seat at a different seat. I put down my bag and guitar at sit down waiting to see if anyone else is going to be here and also waiting for mr.Vernon.
There are six tables in two rows of three. Alisa is sitting at the front table, on the left. As i wait for more people i pull out my phone to see if i got a text or something, as always this is nothing..i put it back in my pocket and as i do so ,Dylan walks in. Well..i didn't know the guy but like...he plays basketball people, of course everyone knows him, and to be honest that's the only reason why i know him, and for everyone else to..as always he has his blue beanie and with his purple sweater with a jean jacket and black baggy jeans a red scarf and a vintage nike backpack and nike shoes
he points to a seat near Alisa and then she shrugs to his movements, he puts down his stuff near Alisa then sits down. A short ginger boy with a red hood over his head with and a 90s nike hoodie on top of his red one with light brown cargo pants and black high top converse. he sat down behind Alisa without saying a word. Then i hear someone walking up the hall way , me thinking it was Mr.Vernon i sat up straight, but oh no it wasn't mr.Vernon , in fact i didn't even know the guy. As he walks in he touches everything on the checkout desk and takes a few things in the process. He walk over to where the short ginger kid was sitting and points to the desk behind me. He grabbed all his stuff and puts it all on the desk behind me. As the guy that stole the shorts kid spot he sits down and puts his feet an top of the desk, another person walks in and runs to the back, ...the very back and sits down without saying anything.

After a good five minutes an awkward silence mr.Vernon. "Well...well.  Here we are!  I want to congradulate you for being on time..." mr.Vernon says looking around the room , Alisa raises her hand " excuse me, sir but i don't think i belong in here..so can i just go.." Alisa asks " It is now seven-oh-six.  You have exactly eight hours and fifty-four minutes to think about why you're here.  To ponder the error of your ways..."
mr.Vernon says completely dodging Alisa's questions  "..and you may not talk.  You will not move from these seats....and you.."  mr.Vernon say's pointing at the guy behind Dylan and Alisa "will not sleep..!" Vernon pulls the chair out from under the kids feet. "ok so today for detention people is we are going to write an essay about you and what you describe yourself as, no less then 1000 words and not the same word repeated 1000 times"  Vernon look at me reminding me what i did last detention. "is this a test?" the kid behind Alisa asked "And when I say essay...I mean essay. I do not mean a single word repeated a thousand times.  Is that clear Mrs.l/n?" he reminds me AGAIN but this time more louder so everyone can here,
"... crystal..." i responded to his question. "Good.  Maybe you'll learn a little something about yourself.  Maybe you'll even--decide whether or not you care to return." Vernon looks at me with a little bit of anger "ok so my office.." he pointed outside of the door to his office " ...is right across that hall.  Any monkey business is ill-advised..." he says looking at all of us (mainly me..).
i look down at the paper and pencil wondering what i should write down..then i just sat looking at this blank pice of paper, then i realized i don't know who i am.

omg cliff hanger 😍😍😍

idk i'm tired and ngl i'm proud off this so far 🤭
i will try make another one tomorrow so yeah
(btw i didn't look over this so there will be mistakes probably 💀)

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