So basically im going to make a little sneak peek at the stories im making to see people's opinions on how to make them better or give me ideas to change my story a little since I'm new at this story-making thing
I do not own most of these character...
Description: Its appearance takes that of a young boy of average height with fairly tanned skin and a skinny but semi-muscular frame/body. He has ruffled, black hair with burgundy tips, combed back to expose his forehead, and wide, dark red eyes with white pupils that appear lighter around the lower section of his irises. He also has a scar on his forehead that takes the form of a lightning bolt The Subjects past before transferring to the Organization lived in the mountains near a village, while there the villagers would go to him to predict the weather that day, and each time the subject would always predict the weather with complete accuracy despite it being 9 at the time Mutation: After being transferred to the Organization the subject has gained the ability to create gentle breezes, though weak it's still young, with enough training and time the subject's power will be able to create stronger winds perhaps even manipulate it
Update: When the subjects experience an extremely negative emotion grey clouds will start to form around the area of the subject, perhaps with time the subject will be able to create and manipulate storms and even the weather itself
Description: Its appearance takes that of a young boy of average height with fairly tanned skin with a small, soft, weak frame/body. He has ruffled, black hair with burgundy tips with wolf ears, combed back to expose his forehead, and wide, dark red eyes with white pupils that appear lighter around the lower section of his irises. He also has a scar on both sides of his cheeks that look like whiskers The Subjects past was living in the mountains near a village, while there it would take care of the animals and pets in and around the village Interviews with the villagers claim that when animals are ever in close vicinity of the subject he could somehow sense where that animal is, further interviews claim the subject has full empathy with animals as if he could understand their language, this ability appears to be a skill shared with Subject 20-40 but at a lower level, only being able to understand a select few species of birds such as a sparrow Mutation: Ever since coming to the Organization the subject has gained an ability that allowed it to influence animals around it. It was shown to be able to make usually skittish animals (like birds and deer) feel easy around it and its brothers and make normally docile animals attack its enemies, such as the birds
Item: Subject 20-40 Real Name: Tanjiro Kamado Alias: Ethereal/Garden of Eden Object Class: Omega-level Mutant Age: 9
Description: Tanjiro is a young boy of average height with fairly tanned skin and a beautiful and gentle physique. He has ruffled, black hair with burgundy tips, combed back to expose his forehead, and wide, dark red eyes with white pupils that appear lighter around the lower section of his irises. He also has a scar on the top left of his forehead The Subject's life before the Organization was in the mountains with a village nearby, where he would take care of their garden and plants as well as help everyone with things they need such as chores Mutation: Since coming to the Organization it has developed the ability to create flowers with time perhaps he will be able to create and manipulate other types of flora
Update Description: Ever since the incident Gehenna Tanjiro Kamado must not be let out of his cell no matter what all future training and experiments are to be denied and all kinds of flora must be kept 50 feet away from him Update Mutation: When aggravated Tanjiro Kamado will go into Gehenna mode which he is able to implant flowers inside a person or thing being able to break them from the inside, it also seems that he has a connection to the plants since he was able to know where the guards were and also a psychic connection with his brothers acting like a hive mind, they're reflexes are also increased drastically being able to dodge bullets and the other subjects seem to also have some enhancements as well such as ███████ ██████ █████████ ███ ███████████ █████ ████████
