Love Meets No Eyes

Chapter 8

Hey guys I was decided to use a new format in writing. I think it might easier to read the story too. If you don't like it then commit and ill go back using the other.

There was a dog that had a smile on his face and was sniffing at the dead person on the ground.

"Well jack looks like you found a pretty hot chick." Jack:" thanks I guess." " Hey whose foot prints are those on the ground?"

jacked looked at the prints and said the girl tried to fight me. Yes I was safe, I though in my head.

"No there's a girl here I smell her."

(Did that dog just talk? Now I thing I'm going insane.)

 I didn't know if I should just stand behind the tree or run... My body was telling me to run so I took off... Bark! Bark! Bark!

Me: " ahhhhh leave me alone! "

Soon the man with the black hair was after me. I got to my house and saw a man with an axe

Me: " who the hell are you."

The man turned and asked with a frightened sound in his voice.

"What are you?"

He got his axe and threw it at me but missed. I looked up and he was gone He got cut off from the old trees that had fallen earlier in the year so he didn't get far.

Me: " Quit running I just wanna talk." I said turning into my mortal form.

"What do you want" The man said turning around to face me. Me: "I don't think it was nice that you threw that axe at me... You should apologize to me."   Man: "Why should I you're a monster."

I stood there in silence for a moment, while the man was looking for a way to escape.

Me: "If I'm the monster than what are you?" I said looking at the man with a serious look on my face.

Man: "well I'm a human of course." Me: "yes you are but most humans are monsters in human form."

He looked at me and then back at a tree that he has been staring at for a while. I walk up to the tree and looked behind it only to find a slug hammer. I picked it up and walked slowly to him.

Me: " have a seat on the ground please."  Man: "Now why would I ever do that?" Me: "just sit down!" Man: "Ok, I don't know who you are but im not going to take orders from a little girl."

I smiled and swung the heavy hammer at his legs. He hit the ground yelling in pain.

Me: "I guess we had to do it the hard way....I didn't want too but your really stubborn." Man: "SOMEONE HELP!!!! THERES A MONSTER TRYING TO KILL ME!!!! HELP!!!!!"

I didn't like to be called a monster so when he said that I help up the hammer and smashed his head in. I whispered quietly.

"You should have listened."

Clap! Clap! Clap!  

"Good way of killing someone"   I turned around to see the man with black hair and the talking dog. I froze not knowing what was going to happen.

Me: "Thanks, I guess...What do you want from me?"   "Nothing really its just....what are you going to do with that man?" Me: "Who are you and why do you care its my body I killed it first?" 

Ok so it may be a bit short but ill work on it more..... And like i said if you don't like the way i wrote this story you can just leave a commit...... thanks bye :D