The Way Home

A bit of notes

Hi! 

So, the last chapter you just read is the original version that I wrote a couple months ago. It's not that perfect, I'm sure you feel the same. So I made a revision!

Well, basically, I added some stuff. A little bit notes for the worldbuilding and some more colors for the characters. Not a lot tho. No, I still want to keep it short and simple. 

Now, I don't feel like archiving the original and only posting the recent version. Like, I still want that version exist online for my future self to read. Idk if that's ideal, but you know what? I'd like for you to see both version too. Maybe you'll find something that's interesting in either or both of them. Maybe you'll kind enough to tell me and help me improve my writing. No pressure tho. Just read it and I hope you'll gain some sort of entertainment in it. Maybe put a little smile on your face today :)