Hiii
Ek baat batao aap sab.. iss TS ka last part aap sabko pasand nahi aaya kya??
Matlab baaki dono parts pe toh votes aur comments aate thhe par iss part par koi nahi kar raha..
Dekho mujhe honestly batana please ki acha laga ya nahi aur agar nahi laga toh kyun nahi?? Matlab mai kya changes karun apni writing style mein??
Aur aap sab agar chahte ho ki mai aur OS/TS/ FS/SS likhun MoRan pe toh comments section mein ideas dena.. Bass ek request hai koi bohot emotional topic matt dena mai cute type stories hee likh paati hoon thoda emotional chalega
PS: Bohot emotional as in NO DEATHS,NO SEPARATION, NO BETRAYAL, NO HEARTBREAKS AND NO NOT TRUSTING THEIR PEOPLE..!! THODA NARAZ HO JANA, THODA DAANT DENA IS OK, BUT NO ABUSE..
Toh ab jab tak ki pichle part par aap sabke reviews aur iss part par aap sab ke suggestions nahi milte tab tak no updates..
Dekho please mujhe rude mat samajhna par try to understand mai sachme bohot mushkil se time nikaalti hoon stories likhne ki par aap sab ke views nahi aate toh lagta hai ki mai shayad acha nahi likh rahi hoon.. Please aisa matt kiya karo..
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The Gift: A MoRan OS
FanfictionMoRan are married. They are in the Academy. Karan is the in charge of Parakram SAF, Deolali. Monami is the head trainer. The training program had started 2 months ago.
