I am Inlove with my BROTHER'S BANDMATE (Louis Tomlinson fanfiction) ONHOLD

Chapter 5: Just A Gift

Lyn's POV

"You got a DATE! You are kidding me right? You can not get a date on your own! You don't even show up in the dates i give you! What the frick!" Brooke shouted at me. When I called her telling her I need something decent to wear. She ran to my store and shout at me like that. "Brooke first of all. Its not a date. He has a girlfriend. Second I asked him to come with me, he didn't ask me. Third, you can't go round here shouting while there are costumers." I said calmly. "Whoops! Sorry everyone!" She said loud enough for everybody to hear. "It can be a date if you want it to be." Someone said. "Who said that?" I asked. "I did!" He said raising one hand up. I pushed Brooke outnof the way to see Louis. "A date it is then!" Brooke said. I playfully punch her in the stomach meaning to shut up. "No! I didn't want it to be a date." I said. "So.. are you ready?" He asked. "No!" Brooke shouted then pushed me to the kitchen to change. She let me change and then made my make up. To be honest, she did a pretty good job for my liking which is light make up. I looked at myself before going outside. I see him in his back turning me while talking to someone. I fake coughed and smiled.

Louis' POV

I was talking to Eleanor to tell her I was going out for dinner with a friend until someone coughed behind me. I saw a beautiful girl infront of me. She has a brown curly hair and sparkling green eyes just like my bestmate. I was cut out of my thoughts by a small voice from my phone.

"Hey El!" I said. "I got to go now! Bye!"

"Hey!" She greeted. "Who were you talking to?"

"Eleanor, my girlfriend." I said. "I told her I was out with a friend."

She nodded. We went to my car and drove to the mall. I exited the car and went to the other side to open her side. "Thank you!" She with a smile. I can tell somethings wrong. "Whats wrong?" I asked. "Did I say something?" She turned to me with a shocked empression. "No! I just miss doing something." She answered. "Lets go!" We went inside the mall and walked around and went into some shops. I was going to pay for her clothes but she refuses to and pays it before I can. We walked around the mall for few more hours. We were walking 5 hours around the mall and I was tired.

I found out some information about her like her mother taught her to bake and encourages her to start a cupcake business when she was 15 but her mother died few days when they moved with her step dad here in London. I was cut in my thoughts when she spoke. "Are you tired?" She asked. "Lets go to this last shop and go eat dinner." I nodded and we went to some sort of baking shop. Of course! I went inside to see her looking at something. I looked at her eyes they were sparkling like stars.. WHAT THE FUCK AM I TALKING ABOUT!?!? I frowned when the sparkles in her eyes went dull. I realized she placed the thing down and walked my way.

Lyn's POV

I placed the the baking stuff down to see that its too expensive for me to buy. I walked over to him and smiled.

"Spotted something you like?" He asked with a smile.

I nodded. "But I won't buy it. Its too expensive for me. I have to save for it" he smiled.

"How about you go to the comfort room because its gonna take awhile before we get to buy dinner." He said looking down at his phone.

"But its just-" I got cut off by him pushing me to the direction of the loo. I nodded quite confused about what he is talking about. We are only going to have dinner at Mcdonalds and its just by the streets? Maybe he needs sometime alone. I didn't need to go to the loo so I just walked around a few minutes before I decide to go back. I walked back to the store to see him holding a bag from the store. Maybe he saw something that he wanted to buy and for me not to know. I heade his direction and saw him not noticing me infront of him.

"So I see you found something?" I asked. He looks so happy looking down his phone maybe her girlfriend texted him. He looked up with a very shocked reaction causing me to laugh my head of. I laughed and laughed until I noticed we were in public! OHGOD! This is so embarrassing. I fix my dress and spoke up. "Sorry everyone kinda-a have a-a hilarious fri-friend he-here." I was nervous, I hated attention. "Soo.." I said looking at the bag. "Oh yeah! I found something! Its for you!" He said handing me the bag. "What! No, I don't need anything." I said pushing the bag away. He frowned. "I saw you looking at it! You'll like-" I cut him off almost screaming. "You bought those! That was expensive! Thats why I didn't buy it!" His face fell. Oh no! I hurt him. I didn't mean it, I just didn't want him to buy anything. He looked down and dropped the bag and left. OH NO!

"Louis. I didn't mean it like that! I am not mad! I just didn't want you to buy me anything." I said in a calm voice while following him. Nothing, he just keep on walking. I hurt him. I sighed and let him go.

He left.

Hi popping readers! I know its been so long! I just kinda got tired of writing and just I dont know! Before I wanted to write everyday but now I kinda just lose it. So this maybe the last time I update. MAYBE! I saw in some stories they asked a certain amount of votes for the chapter so they decide to update or not so that is what I am going to do! I have already done 5 chapters. If the 4 other chapters get 10 votes and this chapter to get atleast 15 to 20 I will update! Peace out Louipops!