A U T H O R ' S N O T E
I hope you all still remember me, AvNeil fans? I hope. I guess. After months, I am here with a new story on AvNeil. First things first, about the story, It's a part from Naamkaran. The perfect story we all dreamt of. I am just trying to let myself heal with it.
And hater, fanaa fans, and others who don't ship AvNeil can kindly move back. I don't want any hate in my book. I write for my satisfaction. You read for your enjoyment. And if you don't find it enjoyable or you don't ship Avni and Neil, kindly try to step back and don't read.
Take this story as an apology note from me, for disappearing like for months and updating my story once in a month. :))
And also don't expect me to update like daily. I will try to update and not disappear.
Enjoy reading the prologue.
P.S : : Want to read Mature content in the story? Please lemme know. I have never wrote it before, but I guess I'll just prefer what you guys want.
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For Avni, life was never easy. She was always battling. Battling with the society, battling with her life, and battling with herself. Avni was never easy on herself. She was always in a pool of lies, underestimating herself in the worst way possible. She lived in that way and she was burning in the pool of vengeance.
Growing up, Avni became hard on herself even more. She was never the girl you can marry and place her on your house as the mother of your children. She was kind of, no fully, a material girl.
What she never expected, nor her mother, was the change that happened in her because of him. He came unpredictably, they met unexpectedly and they got married with the most unexpected way possible. Avni felt her life coming to an end --- marriage was never in her list, and marrying him was never not a thing that crossed her mind, even though, she had feelings for him; and she knew about it too, but she couldn't figure out what name could be given to it.
Life turned horizontally, her whole life came to be at a halt as she couldn't figure out what would she do now. But, he, made it so easy. So easy that she became used to him, drowned in the desire of her love she never experienced before. Everything about him, felt so much to her.
And him. He lived a normal life. Being the only child, he was the apple of his parent's eyes. And he got the job he always desired; to serve the people with law and justice. He was organized, well mannered, perfectionist Punjabi, grew up in Delhi and moved to Mumbai.
His marriage was fixed to a rich family, and then only he met her. The girl who had the sassy attitude with rude words, and doe eyes that had the evil and angel within it. The mole above her lips tempted him too much -- a fact he couldn't just ignore. He was attracted to her.
After all, who wouldn't be attracted to her?
What he didn't expected was how the mysterious girl had the biggest connection with family his marriage is fixed to, and how it went all wrong, and how she became his wife, and everything. It just took hours for his life to take a change and find his first love.
He didn't know when and how she became so important to him. He breathed for her. And she became the reason for him to continue living happily and feel the fullest essence and ecstasy of love.
Their love story wasn't perfect, but they decided to make it Perfect.
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I still do expect some inline comments from you, but it's upto you anyways. But,letting you know, the inline comments just do make me realize you do like my writing. :))
I hope, and I appreciate you're comments and votes.
Love <333
Edit:: I'm back after a year to this story.
There's some changes here, that I would like to add.
1. Ashish Mehta is alive, Avni had forgiven him. Avni also has a twin brother, named Manik Mehta.
2.Manik Mehta is married to Nandini Khanna, and she is portrayed as the younger sister of Neil Khanna, which implies that she's the second child of Prakash and Shweta. (If you look up at "The fiery innocent charcoal orbs" a book of mine, you'd get the reference) Manik and Nandini have a baby girl named -- Sara.
4. Hetal, Ketan, Diksha and Rhea are positive here, I've portrayed them as positive since the beginning.
5. Rhea and Ali is in a relationship.
6. This book continues after the jail track.
7. I would like you all to imagine Season 5 Avni and Neil, as I am doing, for better reading.
8. There's another added member, named Hansika --- Neela and Ashish's daughter.
I will tell about the details in the next chap.
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