Star Wars Song Fanfic

Part 1; Hell's coming with me

My first song Fiction
Anakin, Ahsoka, Rex, Hunter, the 501st and Clone Force 99 literally everyone fight Darth Eclipse
A person sits at the outside of a republic base "come around everyone for a song and story about someone before they became Darth Eclipse" the entire base stopped to lend their ears hoping to learn about the Sith Lord Darth Eclipse
(Soft guitar playing slowly by the mysterious person)
"They all laughed as she turned around slow, they said "you ain't welcome round here anymore" you just might as well go"
"She wiped the blood from her face as she slowly came to her knees"
"She said "I'll be back when you least expect it" and hell's coming with me Hell's coming with me"
(Soft guitar music plays before going hard) ("we're under attack!" "Battle stations now!")
"There is a hill at the bottom of the valley where all the poor souls go when they die and if you listen real close you can hear them like a ghost saying "you're never gonna make it out alive!" There is a town at the bottom of that hill they got a secret that they keep like a slave" ("IT'S DARTH ECLIPSE!")
"They got a black magic preacher we'd do well to let him teach her you'll be heading up that hill to the grave! And it is well with my soul! You line your pockets full of money that you steal from the poor!"
"And on your way down the hill you hear me ring that bell! I'd pay the devil twice as much to keep your soul!"
(More guitar playing)
"There was a drifter passing through that little valley see she had promised she was coming back to town!("coming back to town!") they didn't know her by her face or the lightsaber around her waste but she came back to burn that town to the ground!"
(Short guitar playing) ("we got her!" "What the?" "Skywalker?!" "Neve?" "Skygal?" "Commander?! "Sis!?" "It can't be we saw her drown!")
"First there was fire then there was smoke then that preacher man was hanging by a rope then they all fell to their knees and begged that drifter begged her please as she raised her fist before she spoke" "I am the righteous hand of god I am the devil that you forgot! And I told you day that you will see that I'll be back I guarantee and that hell's coming Hell's coming Hell Hell's coming with me"
(More guitar playing)
"And it is well with my soul you line your pockets full of money that you steal with the poor and on your way down the hill you hear me ring that bell and I said "hell's coming with me" ("hell's coming with me")
(Guitar playing ends) As everyone had faced Darth Eclipse whose mask was dislodged by Wrecker Echo and Fives revealing Eclipse's face or rather Neve's shocking the entire base "she's alive?" "No way how did she survive why didn't she come back?" "Don't stand there capture her!"
And so they captured her and are keeping her unconscious in order to use the force to find out what happened to her.